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technology~the machine
hunted expressions
I'm searching you human
do you feel anything?
are you numb in there?
is it cold where you are?
in the calculated dawn
we are but a wrinkle in the infinite
I heard your first breath
technology has taken your last
the hour grows late
are you wasted enough not to think?
inside the machine
Published 1st Mar 2022
Author's Note
just my thoughts as we rely more on tech, and we have less human interaction while listening to Pink Floyd's "The Machine"
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1st Mar 2022 7:12am
I relate to this now I'm paralyzed I rely on machines for movement, spasm relief, it seems everyday I need more I'm full of metal rods and pumps I'm turning into Robo poet
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
1st Mar 2022 3:03pm
good morning dearest Ron I understand your need medically and am grateful you find relief I was thinking more along the lines of text speech and the greatly lessened human interaction we have technology has it's uses certainly thank you my friend for sharing ❤️
1st Mar 2022 9:57am
I find this subject matter to be very interesting.
I used to listen to this talk radio show...
(Need to start listening again. You can actually subscribe to the app.
I listened to it on the radio, and envisioned myself one day
listening to it, late at night... Under a night time sky...)
But one of the wildest episodes was one one "the singularity".
I like the structure of this, Crimsin...
Works so well for the subject matter.
I used to listen to this talk radio show...
(Need to start listening again. You can actually subscribe to the app.
I listened to it on the radio, and envisioned myself one day
listening to it, late at night... Under a night time sky...)
But one of the wildest episodes was one one "the singularity".
I like the structure of this, Crimsin...
Works so well for the subject matter.
1st Mar 2022 11:34am
Some people are so cold inside and out. You do wonder if there is a human in there. Kisses, Robert.
1st Mar 2022 2:25pm
"We are the Borg. Lower your shields and surrender your ships. We will add your biological and technological distinctiveness to our own. Your culture will adapt to service us. Resistance is futile." (Star Trek: First Contact)
14th Mar 2022 7:44pm
Love that Pink Floyd song. This piece really points out in that direction. The movie Her with Joaquin Phoenix explored that relationship as AI becomes more a possibility in the near future.
