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The Girl Above The Clouds
In the realm of darkness, he comes to me
Satin sheets slowly withdrawn
Breasts palmed in anticipation of his bidding
Eyes fluttering close
The vapor effervescent of his presence dons my sagacity
My needs he wants to feed
My body in heat he wants to claim
A celestial Goddess to the moans he enlists from speech
Infinity we shall become as one
Unbridled carnal wisps of delights found in rays of light
Meandering over my feverish skin of obscurity
His mistress of the night to beguile
My passion he instills, only to be awaken, intimately aroused
Under him no bounds of time shall asunder
Mm... resilient hands of yesterday
My thighs slowly parceled
Lapping at the ingress of a hunger to repast
Curvature of my spine to receive
Bridging my body for the empowering lust of joviality to devour
A zigzagging tongue in the quest, a sluggish wet trail it leads
Imbibing from the cascade of my moisten essence, it follows
Erratic heartbeats echoing in the still of the night
Eyes staring at my overtness
His desires gradually tease, driving deeper inside me
Bearing the fit of his commanding foray plunges
Entwined of me, intangible of him
My scent hankering his pores
I ache to become his
Wicked tales of seduction as I partition my divinity wider
Into the flames of fire, we dance in desertion
Flames of lust consuming our regal entities
Combustible, we tighten, caged raptured disbursed
#CelebratingBlackHistoryMonth
Satin sheets slowly withdrawn
Breasts palmed in anticipation of his bidding
Eyes fluttering close
The vapor effervescent of his presence dons my sagacity
My needs he wants to feed
My body in heat he wants to claim
A celestial Goddess to the moans he enlists from speech
Infinity we shall become as one
Unbridled carnal wisps of delights found in rays of light
Meandering over my feverish skin of obscurity
His mistress of the night to beguile
My passion he instills, only to be awaken, intimately aroused
Under him no bounds of time shall asunder
Mm... resilient hands of yesterday
My thighs slowly parceled
Lapping at the ingress of a hunger to repast
Curvature of my spine to receive
Bridging my body for the empowering lust of joviality to devour
A zigzagging tongue in the quest, a sluggish wet trail it leads
Imbibing from the cascade of my moisten essence, it follows
Erratic heartbeats echoing in the still of the night
Eyes staring at my overtness
His desires gradually tease, driving deeper inside me
Bearing the fit of his commanding foray plunges
Entwined of me, intangible of him
My scent hankering his pores
I ache to become his
Wicked tales of seduction as I partition my divinity wider
Into the flames of fire, we dance in desertion
Flames of lust consuming our regal entities
Combustible, we tighten, caged raptured disbursed
#CelebratingBlackHistoryMonth
Author's Note
Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
Ann Landers
Ann Landers
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Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 1:46am
You always fall in love with your best friend, which leads to great sex. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen of Love.
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Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 1:53am
That is a wonderful way to look at any new beginning, and that is, only if that friend is receptive in the foray of that beautiful journey.
Always keep in mind, every friend we are fortunate to have in our life are not to be courted as a lover.
Thank you, my handsomer poet, for your poetic analogy, which is very much appreciated
Please enjoy the remaining hours of this Saturday as we pray for more time with a new tomorrow... and be safe out there, please
Always keep in mind, every friend we are fortunate to have in our life are not to be courted as a lover.
Thank you, my handsomer poet, for your poetic analogy, which is very much appreciated
Please enjoy the remaining hours of this Saturday as we pray for more time with a new tomorrow... and be safe out there, please
Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 1:55am
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27th Feb 2022 4:50pm
Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 6:37pm
I will enjoy my Sunday. You enjoy your Sunday too and stay safe my sexy Queen.
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27th Feb 2022 6:44pm
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27th Feb 2022 6:51pm
Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 2:12am
This is my favorite poem of year so far. I think you did a great job. This mysterious person is a very lucky guy to have a girl like you talk about him in such a way and how you feel when with him. I’m going to leave you a second comment which is more in depth about my favorite parts but for now no that was a great write.
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Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 3:43pm
Thank you, my poet, for taking the time to read and then providing such a great comment in merit
Please enjoy your Sunday and may you be pleased to encounter a welcoming upcoming week
Please enjoy your Sunday and may you be pleased to encounter a welcoming upcoming week
Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 3:49am
Well Hell, i had to shift something a bit, in my pants, as I read this. Because, what vocabulary!
(Hell yeah I like a "talker").
As a teen, I used to read Ann Landers, and her sister Abby. And read my sisters Cosmo mags too. Because I never turned down free pointers!
To this day even, reading is enlightenment, if we pay attention.
You consistently show the way.
Awesome write!
(Hell yeah I like a "talker").
As a teen, I used to read Ann Landers, and her sister Abby. And read my sisters Cosmo mags too. Because I never turned down free pointers!
To this day even, reading is enlightenment, if we pay attention.
You consistently show the way.
Awesome write!
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Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 4:11pm
What awesome comment you have blessed upon my canvas, my poet, and with much poetic respect, thank you
In addition, that notation goes for reading as well. Have a magnificent day and a productive upcoming week
In addition, that notation goes for reading as well. Have a magnificent day and a productive upcoming week
Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 1:57pm
Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 4:33pm
Lol... If it is NASA certified than I will gladly accept... That was fun, was it not, and thank you for the blast off comment.
In this day of rocket-socket commuting, thank you for reading
Please take the time to enjoy this day my wandering poet and may you have a wonderful upcoming week
In this day of rocket-socket commuting, thank you for reading
Please take the time to enjoy this day my wandering poet and may you have a wonderful upcoming week
Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 1:58pm
The withdrawn sheets are a lovely opening to this piece. It certainly sounds like a lovely spot to be...above those clouds.
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Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 4:46pm
I do admire your point of view when those sheets, as you stated, are withdrawn... If I was to slightly tilt my view to one side, I can see the thing that beckons my desire...
On that craving momentum, thank you for the comment, my tender poet, and that appreciation goes to reading in as much
Have an awesome Sunday and keep your head deep rooted in the clouds, always, as I wish you an inspiring upcoming week 🎁
On that craving momentum, thank you for the comment, my tender poet, and that appreciation goes to reading in as much
Have an awesome Sunday and keep your head deep rooted in the clouds, always, as I wish you an inspiring upcoming week 🎁
Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 6:49pm
Your heart is beauty of a million roses and poppy spread all around the world.
I adore your sweet and lovable heart & soul🤗♥️
Always your sister
Jackie xo
I adore your sweet and lovable heart & soul🤗♥️
Always your sister
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
27th Feb 2022 7:38pm
Ahh... this comment is for the books my poetess, and thank you for taking the time out of your busy day to scribble a grand sentiment upon mine
Please enjoy your Sunday, and may you be rewarded on this day, and the upcoming week
Please enjoy your Sunday, and may you be rewarded on this day, and the upcoming week
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28th Feb 2022 7:07am
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Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
1st Mar 2022 1:30am
You are so kind with your comments, my poet, always and they are heartfelt to the uttermost, and taken in regality.
Thank you, with much poetic appreciation for taking the time to read my mental ponders and then gracing my canvas to advise me of your approval
Please take the time to enjoy this Monday evening as I wish you all the beautiful blessings tomorrow will bestow upon your presence
Thank you, with much poetic appreciation for taking the time to read my mental ponders and then gracing my canvas to advise me of your approval
Please take the time to enjoy this Monday evening as I wish you all the beautiful blessings tomorrow will bestow upon your presence
Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
19th Apr 2022 5:16pm
allow me to join her in the clouds of the passion as my mind is waiting there
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Re: Re. The Girl Above The Clouds
16th May 2023 4:46am
I am just now seeing this my friend and thank you for taking the time to read and then commenting.