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twisted bones/and sick fantasies
it just doesn't feel real
this unsolved gruesomeness
of your infidelities
why would you murder what we had
and just casually toss our memories in the fire
to feed those vicious flames?
why?
why?
metaphorically
you stabbed me in the stomach
but it feels real in such a way
that i sickly imagine the wounds on my body.
this unsolved gruesomeness
of your infidelities
why would you murder what we had
and just casually toss our memories in the fire
to feed those vicious flames?
why?
why?
metaphorically
you stabbed me in the stomach
but it feels real in such a way
that i sickly imagine the wounds on my body.
Published 25th Feb 2022
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25th Feb 2022 3:03am
You should add love to this piece, it's dark love for sure. This is a tight piece of darkness
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
25th Feb 2022 3:05am
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25th Feb 2022 4:08am
26th Feb 2022 8:31pm
If you focus long enough it will become realty, depending on what it is and how much you infuse it with life.
5th Mar 2022 7:13am
This is a wonderfully dark piece of poetic genius.
The highlight for me was the murder personification
Well done!
This is solid
Blue Skies At You
Al
The highlight for me was the murder personification
Well done!
This is solid
Blue Skies At You
Al
