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sheds
Keep talking.
Don't bother walking.
The house
the house
the house
the house
is falling down.
Why wait?
Pleasant outing
Sounds fake
Sounds great
Don't bother trying
You know what I'm talking about.
I hope the roof gives out.
Don't bother walking.
The house
the house
the house
the house
is falling down.
Why wait?
Pleasant outing
Sounds fake
Sounds great
Don't bother trying
You know what I'm talking about.
I hope the roof gives out.
Published 23rd Feb 2022
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21st Apr 2022 3:48pm
I actually quite liked this little piece. It's very direct and I think that adds a little something to the value of the words. Very stripped back and I like that about a poem.
thank you for sharing
-M
thank you for sharing
-M
