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mur-mur-men
In deep time
I clasp the fins together and
Move through the water
Liquid, fluid, cool to the touch,
You exhale
You look at me and
Turn away
And slip into the reef
Under the water’s surface
Hear yourself decide
An artificial heartbeat
With intentions coincide
plip
Published 22nd Feb 2022
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22nd Feb 2022 6:48pm
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2022 7:17pm
Yes! I TOTALLY agree.
24th Feb 2022 4:17pm
i'm glad yall enjoyed this poem but it wasn't about sex hahaha
thanks for commenting though :)
thanks for commenting though :)
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Feb 2022 5:16pm
24th Feb 2022 5:15pm
Oh I know that. Haha, lol. deep time outside of material existence, an' all dat
Lovely poem, my dear friend, whatever it's abouts ☺️
Lovely poem, my dear friend, whatever it's abouts ☺️
24th Feb 2022 6:50pm
22nd Mar 2022 11:10pm
Hello there
I think I was drawn to this because I’m absolutely in love with the mythology of mermaids, so it was beautiful to read a poem that brings all of that folklore to the surface, if you’ll pardon the pun.
Thank you for sharing this deep blue little read.
-M
I think I was drawn to this because I’m absolutely in love with the mythology of mermaids, so it was beautiful to read a poem that brings all of that folklore to the surface, if you’ll pardon the pun.
Thank you for sharing this deep blue little read.
-M
24th Mar 2022 2:23pm
the ocean has always been special to me
and i think that we are all merpeople in a sense
though we breathe air and not water
both are fluids
and i think that we are all merpeople in a sense
though we breathe air and not water
both are fluids
