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Unicorns
Broken Wings
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Broken Wings
The wounded
butterfly is
basically dead.
Written by
nikkimoe
Published
21st Feb 2022
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My photo.
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#death
#unicorns
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Re. Broken Wings
FeNyX
21st Feb 2022 9:36pm
Sigh ... Bless and love ... ..
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Re. Broken Wings
Cipher_O
(WarlordoftheWrittenWord)
22nd Feb 2022 12:27pm
This just reverberates in different dimensions... Which is very
much a trademark of your work.
I like how the structure of this piece is like
a burst of thought provoking energy...
Just as is the companion photo, as well as a physical butterfly.
This makes me think of the nature of
flight and freedom...
As well as the idea of absolutes.
If the concept of flight
or freedom, are in any compromised...
Then what was once pure can no longer be pure...
And how society seems to seek
to hinder us in such ways, at every turn, it seems.
Yes.
I want to be pure,
in order to purify.
And never compromise.
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rabbitquest
23rd Feb 2022 1:50pm
The butterfly life stages are really amazing.
here is a butterfly repair shop:
https://youtu.be/ah0SBALIc0o
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Re. Broken Wings
wallyroo92
11th Mar 2022 7:42pm
True and wise words. Awesome photo.
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