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Big brother
I almost freaked out.
An eye on the internet
Listening to the hockey game
On the radio,
Taking a peek at the TV (no sound)
And, boom, a guy talking
No big deal
Except he looks like my older brother
Dead decades ago
An eye on the internet
Listening to the hockey game
On the radio,
Taking a peek at the TV (no sound)
And, boom, a guy talking
No big deal
Except he looks like my older brother
Dead decades ago
Published 20th Feb 2022
Author's Note
...I say ''negative'' and add ''sadness''. But it is neither, really. I never had a good or close relationship with him. He was pretty much a stranger to me.
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20th Feb 2022 10:56am
That's kind of interesting though. Imagine seeing a long dead brother again I'd freak out. 😊
20th Feb 2022 12:51pm
Indeed, I feel that there could be the making of some very weird, strange, horrendous type of short story to be drawn from this. Regards, Robert.
4th Mar 2022 1:29pm
4th Mar 2022 3:25pm
Thinking about it. Or something like they had on fantasy Island, years ago. Thanks.
Estranged sibling relationships are odd, especially when at one time you may have been close when growing up and then for whatever circumstances it just took a turn.
Interesting write.
Interesting write.
11th Mar 2022 3:58pm
And as i am 73 now and sometimes during sleep and dreams I see some of my relatives, Really weird. Somebody somewhere is sending me a message of sorts. Regards, Robert.
