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Happy Valentines Day
It was Valentine's day
I was going to let you love me in every way
So I went into your house
quiet as a mouse
such a huge surprise
what horror met my eyes
you were a tangled mess
intertwined with my best friend none the less
I loved you so much
I missed your loving touch
then I stopped my cries
because everyone of them were lies
I was so filled with hate
I quietly opened the gate
I thought this was going to be fun
So I pulled the trigger on my gun
You were still fucking in the bed
So I seized the opportunity and shot you both in the head
Then I saw all the blood
I finally realized what I had done
So all boys
do not treat your girls like toys
and
Happy Valentines day
I was going to let you love me in every way
So I went into your house
quiet as a mouse
such a huge surprise
what horror met my eyes
you were a tangled mess
intertwined with my best friend none the less
I loved you so much
I missed your loving touch
then I stopped my cries
because everyone of them were lies
I was so filled with hate
I quietly opened the gate
I thought this was going to be fun
So I pulled the trigger on my gun
You were still fucking in the bed
So I seized the opportunity and shot you both in the head
Then I saw all the blood
I finally realized what I had done
So all boys
do not treat your girls like toys
and
Happy Valentines day
Written by
dangerousdesires
(TheVoicesAreWatching)
Published 10th Mar 2012
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lol....
10th Mar 2012 5:08pm
that was so funny
you cant dip in all the honey
or you will get a surprise like wow
the last thing you hear is the gun go blwow...lol
you cant dip in all the honey
or you will get a surprise like wow
the last thing you hear is the gun go blwow...lol
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10th Mar 2012 5:17pm
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10th Mar 2012 5:14pm
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10th Mar 2012 5:18pm
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10th Mar 2012 5:22pm
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10th Mar 2012 5:48pm
Reminds me...
11th Mar 2012 8:08pm
Of a Bullet For My Valentine video...Tears Won't Fall. Epic. So is this something that really happened to you? Minus the murder of course! x x
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12th Mar 2012 3:51am
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12th Mar 2012 4:32am
Well I'm glad that no one was slain, but sorry for your heart-pain. Unfortunately it is one of life's lessons that should never happen but is all too common.
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12th Mar 2012 4:38am
Thank you, and I have been over him for a long time, but now I have a chance to vent in ways that I like to thanks to this website.
Sudden surprise.
11th Mar 2012 11:01pm
Wow.This piece is awesome.It's a subject that we all fear when being in love.We put ourselves in that kind of situation out of spite,just to see how we would go about handling something so drastic.I haven't had the miisfortune but your poem was quite enough for me.I loved how with each verse,the situations unfolded.You intrigued me with this one dangerous desires!Thank you !
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12th Mar 2012 3:51am
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18th Mar 2012 6:04pm
I would also like to thank you for the compliment I really needed it. So thanks.
lovely!
27th Mar 2012 11:35am
I loved this poem :D Love, surprise, sadness, then anger lol. Glad you can vent here. It's what helped me when I went through that sort of pain. Wonderful job!
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HOLY SHIT..
1st Apr 2012 7:31pm
re: HOLY SHIT..
2nd Apr 2012 3:14am