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the wonder of the soul

 
in the loneliness I am understood
I ache it echoes back...I know
my mind a vast landscape
I come across visitors of the unknown
they are my company on this trek
 
learning humanity is tricky
so many emotions to navigate
along with getting to know everyone
personal feelings something I'm careful with
sometimes it's a land mine ready to go off in my face
 
some people I hate
my guides say be patient  
what you hate most, they reflect something about yourself
some I admire and wish to immulate  
but I have missing parts or the ingrediants are off
some I love and have tender feelings for
 
I wonder if I'm lonely because I am frightened
touching the beauty of the soul
wow it's awe inspiring
lingers the kiss and I am blushing
it's happening again that feeling
to be human sigh is amazing
 
 
 
Written by smackdownraven
Published | Edited 12th Feb 2022
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