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smoke
filtered smoke rings
drifted in beautiful wisps about him
in the foggy morning
she wondered who
they were meant for
what his heart was longing
In exhaled messages
why she found that
so damn sexy
drifted in beautiful wisps about him
in the foggy morning
she wondered who
they were meant for
what his heart was longing
In exhaled messages
why she found that
so damn sexy
Published 8th Feb 2022
Author's Note
Capturing this moment by some old docked boats .. he stood alone in the mist with his thoughts and his smoke
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31st Aug 2022 1:21pm
It's too bad what smoking does to the lungs, because yes, people really do LOOK good when they are smoking.
How many movie stars have made a career out of doing just that?
And smoke rings always make me think of Gandalf.
How many movie stars have made a career out of doing just that?
And smoke rings always make me think of Gandalf.
