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THE SIRENS HOWLED
THE SIRENS HOWLED
I heard them slipping through the gate.
I awoke with a clenched fist. Frost enduring.
The door was slid opened with a swift thud
as my fist hit frozen meat...repeat...
repeat.....repeat.....
......THE SIRENS HOWLED.........
I heard them slipping through the gate.
I awoke with a clenched fist. Frost enduring.
The door was slid opened with a swift thud
as my fist hit frozen meat...repeat...
repeat.....repeat.....
......THE SIRENS HOWLED.........
Published 5th Feb 2022
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5th Feb 2022 3:02pm
5th Feb 2022 5:48pm
7th Feb 2022 10:19am
I was thinking about nobody reading my work. shit drunk, i decided to experiment with the Hemmingway way. It worked.
16th Feb 2022 3:45am
Hey Archie
My word game playing pardner, it's 3.40 am over here, can't sleep, said I'd take a peek at your poetry.
This is pretty damm good,, raw, powerful, seems the Hemmingway way is working OK for you 😁
Great poem
Love n peace my friend
💜💜🙏🙏
My word game playing pardner, it's 3.40 am over here, can't sleep, said I'd take a peek at your poetry.
This is pretty damm good,, raw, powerful, seems the Hemmingway way is working OK for you 😁
Great poem
Love n peace my friend
💜💜🙏🙏
16th Feb 2022 4:10am
Thank you very much, Whyme, I actually probably wrote this at about 3:40 AM. I like to experiment with different writing styles. I don't know what time zone you live in, but I live in Dallas Texas , and keep vampire hours.
18th Feb 2022 3:19pm
12th Apr 2022 11:55am
