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WITH THE FLOW

We went with the flow:
neither could say No
as drink took over
me and my lover.

We'd both got naked,
('How?' defied my head)
when the shared desire
overwhelmed like fire.

While most guests below
were on the go-go,
feet on floor pounding
to music sounding.

In his room alone
with him, his proud bone
was pointed at me,
as I downed on knee.

My mouth took him in
to pubes past foreskin,
my tongue on his meat
(as was on mum's teat).

'Midst silence I sucked
as his hips reared, bucked,
the slurping apart
of me on that part.

I got him shaking
as I set waking
hid inner juices
such play produces.

He was enjoying
my oral toying,
moaned he'd be cummin'
if I don't give in.

My mouth I withdrew,
as all came out, through
his spout on my face.
while head held in place.

That way he marked me
as territory
for further conquest
when on bed we rest.

I felt more desired,
his libido fired.
We set to proceed,
completing the deed.



Written by Solomon_Song
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Author's Note
Inspired by the scene in Nizana's 'Beautiful', a retelling of the story.
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