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The Bright Darkness of Psychosis
These stars are black
Across the white sky.
In happy madness -
I stare up into this abyss.
Inspired madmen
Are pure lunatics.
I could not speak to this storm,
So, it gently spoke for me.
This blizzard will make you shiver,
You will sense it creeping closer.
I ponder at the panoramic,
Sudden sweeping of the clouds.
I am left curious, has this disturbance
Swept all realities away?
Down into the darkness,
Psychosis has blinded me!
Across the white sky.
In happy madness -
I stare up into this abyss.
Inspired madmen
Are pure lunatics.
I could not speak to this storm,
So, it gently spoke for me.
This blizzard will make you shiver,
You will sense it creeping closer.
I ponder at the panoramic,
Sudden sweeping of the clouds.
I am left curious, has this disturbance
Swept all realities away?
Down into the darkness,
Psychosis has blinded me!
Published 30th Jan 2022
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30th Jan 2022 5:25am
That is a very powerful piece my poet, it is direct, and it prompts an individual to ponder of their own state of mentality and dealing with the complexities of life in general... very nicely composed
30th Jan 2022 5:55am
Your choice of wording is carefully crafted; and the imagery you paint.. I love the line “ I ponder at the panoramic, Sudden sweeping of the clouds.”
30th Jan 2022 11:49am
I find a balance in your poem which consists of carrying the readers through the colours of your experiences. A unifying journey.
