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In Echoes
Shadow stretches across
Circumference of the soul
From candle
To
Candle
In lambent contemplations
Of
Finality in finite
Moments of memory
Across swaying
Veil
Whispering
In
Infinity
Cloaked in black
Shuffle
Cascade bouquet
Falling
In shrouded waterfall
Like unwept tears
In ink deserts
Calling
In echoes of moonless
Sonatas
In notes of echo
Just
Echoing in echoes.
Published 29th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Inspired by "Haunted Prayer" by Adelphina.
(Her piece made me think about a friend who has passed.)
(Her piece made me think about a friend who has passed.)
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29th Jan 2022 11:28am
29th Jan 2022 12:15pm
30th Jan 2022 8:28am
this is captivatingly insightful , and amazing imagery captured lends
a beautiful, ethereal aura throughout this ink
a beautiful, ethereal aura throughout this ink
30th Jan 2022 5:43pm
30th Jan 2022 6:41pm
Hey Cipher,
You know I write hoping to make people feel something...anything really.
I feel as writers we hope to help and send enlightenment. It doesn't have to be
published or win any Nobel prizes but to help people. I'm so happy something
I wrote inspired such a beautiful and captivating poem - even when the reasoning behind
the write comes from a dark place.
Never had anyone be prompted by something I wrote. This is extra special to me.
Such an honor amigo:)
You know I write hoping to make people feel something...anything really.
I feel as writers we hope to help and send enlightenment. It doesn't have to be
published or win any Nobel prizes but to help people. I'm so happy something
I wrote inspired such a beautiful and captivating poem - even when the reasoning behind
the write comes from a dark place.
Never had anyone be prompted by something I wrote. This is extra special to me.
Such an honor amigo:)
30th Jan 2022 8:16pm
Beautiful and wise words, Adelphina.
I deeply appreciate them...
Well now I'm just inspired
to be inspired by ya. :)))
I deeply appreciate them...
Well now I'm just inspired
to be inspired by ya. :)))
