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Dancing with the Stars
21st was my deathday
and even though I’ve died
I’ve never felt so alive
heartbeat faded into a drive
decided on a different
celestial trajectory
towards the galactic city
seduced away from god
told mom and dad to
let go of my hands
they tried to hold on
but I was already gone
bypassed golden heaven
crowded with confession
searching for new
music sessions
heard their sparkle of
promise and musical comets
hypnotized and drawn
this is where I belong
21st was my deathday
and even though I've died
I’ve never felt so alive
heartbeat faded into a song
moving and grooving
to music playing acoustic
with Selina’s guitar
dancing with the stars
and even though I’ve died
I’ve never felt so alive
heartbeat faded into a drive
decided on a different
celestial trajectory
towards the galactic city
seduced away from god
told mom and dad to
let go of my hands
they tried to hold on
but I was already gone
bypassed golden heaven
crowded with confession
searching for new
music sessions
heard their sparkle of
promise and musical comets
hypnotized and drawn
this is where I belong
21st was my deathday
and even though I've died
I’ve never felt so alive
heartbeat faded into a song
moving and grooving
to music playing acoustic
with Selina’s guitar
dancing with the stars
Author's Note
I love to dance. Not Britney Spears choreography. LOL
Just to move and groove:) the less complicated the better.
Also a little shout out to Selina and her guitar:)
Listening to LA Witch - baby in blue jeans.
Love the guitar in this.
Just to move and groove:) the less complicated the better.
Also a little shout out to Selina and her guitar:)
Listening to LA Witch - baby in blue jeans.
Love the guitar in this.
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
28th Jan 2022 1:08am
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Re: Re. Dancing with the Stars
28th Jan 2022 1:23am
Hey Relic:)
It is darker. I don't know about you but when I'm gone there better be music!!! There will be a sit down if not.:)
In all seriousness - it just went there.
I'm in a writing mood so off I went.
Might post another here in a bit.
I love garage rock. Especially indie rock.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo
The RL too.
My lucky night:)
It is darker. I don't know about you but when I'm gone there better be music!!! There will be a sit down if not.:)
In all seriousness - it just went there.
I'm in a writing mood so off I went.
Might post another here in a bit.
I love garage rock. Especially indie rock.
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo
The RL too.
My lucky night:)
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
28th Jan 2022 1:33am
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Re: Re. Dancing with the Stars
28th Jan 2022 1:40am
Hahahahah
Don't forget shiny too. LOL
Just a friendly reminder. Oh wait - and sparkly.
Yeah - don't forget sparkly too. hehehehe
Don't forget shiny too. LOL
Just a friendly reminder. Oh wait - and sparkly.
Yeah - don't forget sparkly too. hehehehe
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28th Jan 2022 1:42am
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28th Jan 2022 2:57am
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Re: Re. Dancing with the Stars
28th Jan 2022 3:04am
Hey BP,
I love slow dancing.
Especially when your partner smells good:)
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo!
I love slow dancing.
Especially when your partner smells good:)
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo!
Re. Dancing with the Stars
28th Jan 2022 3:09am
good evening beautiful Aldelphina this is beautiful expression
I loved Selena too...I love music as well and expressing myself through movement
so this write spoke to me 💕
I loved Selena too...I love music as well and expressing myself through movement
so this write spoke to me 💕
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Re: Re. Dancing with the Stars
29th Jan 2022 1:25am
Hi Crimsin:)
Thank you so much. I was playing around with this idea. My fav artist is Frida Kahlo. I love all her flowers and self portraits. How she depicted her darker stuff also speaks to me. Wish I could paint like that but I can't. So when I write I try to channel how I think she would paint it. Sounds complicated but that is me. LOL
Also I fixed my typo. I meant sultry selina. LOL Typos are going to be the death of me!! hahah
Thank you so much for your lovely comment:)
Thank you so much. I was playing around with this idea. My fav artist is Frida Kahlo. I love all her flowers and self portraits. How she depicted her darker stuff also speaks to me. Wish I could paint like that but I can't. So when I write I try to channel how I think she would paint it. Sounds complicated but that is me. LOL
Also I fixed my typo. I meant sultry selina. LOL Typos are going to be the death of me!! hahah
Thank you so much for your lovely comment:)
Re. Dancing with the Stars
28th Jan 2022 12:21pm
Hi A
Gorgeous poem, even though dark, it danced with light and happiness.
Last time I got in the groove was with Madonna, not the booldy painting, even then I danced like an elephant on steroids😂.
You got rhythm to your words that makes me wanna shout.
Lovely poem my friend
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏
Gorgeous poem, even though dark, it danced with light and happiness.
Last time I got in the groove was with Madonna, not the booldy painting, even then I danced like an elephant on steroids😂.
You got rhythm to your words that makes me wanna shout.
Lovely poem my friend
Love n peace
💜💜💜🙏
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Re: Re. Dancing with the Stars
29th Jan 2022 1:31am
Hey Whyme:)
Thank you so much. When I was younger I loved Madonna.
I remember when she cut her hair short - I was like - who is that?
I had all the torn up jeans and gloves. The whole nine yards amigo.
It's been a minute since I've danced like I got steroids. hahahah
So glad you stopped by for a visit.
and go ahead and shout!!! LOL
Thank you so much. When I was younger I loved Madonna.
I remember when she cut her hair short - I was like - who is that?
I had all the torn up jeans and gloves. The whole nine yards amigo.
It's been a minute since I've danced like I got steroids. hahahah
So glad you stopped by for a visit.
and go ahead and shout!!! LOL
Re. Dancing with the Stars
28th Jan 2022 1:16pm
Re: Re. Dancing with the Stars
29th Jan 2022 1:32am
Hey Tim!!
To be free is the goal my friend:) Wherever this life
takes us:)
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo!!!
To be free is the goal my friend:) Wherever this life
takes us:)
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amigo!!!
Re. Dancing with the Stars
29th Jan 2022 9:15am
So cool.
You know...
I was admiring the "Yellowjackets soundtrack" and
felt somehow that you dug the soundtrack as well.
:)))
I like it when people dance.
I have a few cool moves.
:)))
You know...
I was admiring the "Yellowjackets soundtrack" and
felt somehow that you dug the soundtrack as well.
:)))
I like it when people dance.
I have a few cool moves.
:)))
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Re: Re. Dancing with the Stars
29th Jan 2022 9:34pm
Hey Cipher,
So glad you enjoyed this write. I just had the chorus in my head on repeat so I had to write down.
Ha!! I love the Yellowjackets soundtrack.
Especially the theme song.
You are spot on amigo.
A few cool moves - I have no doubt. hahah
Thanks for commenting and stopping by:)
So glad you enjoyed this write. I just had the chorus in my head on repeat so I had to write down.
Ha!! I love the Yellowjackets soundtrack.
Especially the theme song.
You are spot on amigo.
A few cool moves - I have no doubt. hahah
Thanks for commenting and stopping by:)