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Trust Me
What good is love
Without trust?
Judge my motives
If you must
But there is
Nothing I'd like more
For you to see
It's you I adore
Don't be too shy
To ask me
If you think
Something is wrong
For I have been honest
With you all along
I would never hurt
You purposely
Why can't you just
Trust me?
Without trust?
Judge my motives
If you must
But there is
Nothing I'd like more
For you to see
It's you I adore
Don't be too shy
To ask me
If you think
Something is wrong
For I have been honest
With you all along
I would never hurt
You purposely
Why can't you just
Trust me?
Published 27th Jan 2022
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29th Jan 2022 1:21pm
YES! Trust is the amazing glue that holds hearts together. Hugs and peace, xo, Oral
29th Jan 2022 2:00pm
Good morning! Thank you for your lovely comments about my poem. They mean a lot to me.
2nd Feb 2022 3:59am
Dear FM,
I really like the subject of this poem. In theory trust should be the crux of any relationship and yet for some we might as well be reaching for the moon. You have a wonderful format and I love the honest presentation between the speaker and the recipient. It’s so clean and straightforward. H🌷
I really like the subject of this poem. In theory trust should be the crux of any relationship and yet for some we might as well be reaching for the moon. You have a wonderful format and I love the honest presentation between the speaker and the recipient. It’s so clean and straightforward. H🌷
13th May 2022 10:54am
Dearest H,
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. Your comments mean so much to me.
I hope you have a great weekend. Take care, my friend!
Faith
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. Your comments mean so much to me.
I hope you have a great weekend. Take care, my friend!
Faith
