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WE’RE GOING TO LIVE
Have you ever just sat still
And Completely witnessed time?
Raising this glass of wine
Trying hard to write a line
It’s been so so so long
Staring at my stupid phone screen
Hands full on twitchy
Toes spinning—they know
Anxiety can’t be
Exhausting tiny toes
Woahing away.
Published 16th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Been away, but now I’m back.
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16th Jan 2022 6:14am
Intriguing write, waiting for the words to come out can certainly delve deep into the psyche and subconscious of the human spirit, watching the time as if self hypnotizing and getting to that discovery.
Well done
(and welcome back)
Well done
(and welcome back)
16th Jan 2022 12:59pm
You're back with a thinking poem
Read it 5 times
The words will come Lilly
When they do it will be a rush and a torrent of emotion
Welcome back
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Read it 5 times
The words will come Lilly
When they do it will be a rush and a torrent of emotion
Welcome back
Like
16th Jan 2022 2:30pm
That feeling you should be doing something, making decisions, accomplishing goals; but the dread of doing so, the paralysis the engulfs you. All just making your anxiety worse.
Welcome to DUP. Enjoyed your insightful words
Welcome to DUP. Enjoyed your insightful words
18th Jan 2022 5:48am
Welcome back. I can't say that I've had much trouble with finding the right words to get my message across, however, how good it looks to others that's another story.
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20th Jan 2022 4:19am
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20th Jan 2022 4:50am
11th Aug 2023 9:19am
It's nice seeing you back. I never realised you went away, lol. Anyway... this nice little effort very much feels to me like you're trying to coax yourself out of writer's block. This write works for me! 😊
