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into the ether.. my hopes go [will she know?]
this
heart has
been crafted
by the fine
web of words
you spin
what is
beautifully
weaved
is so
appealing
to my soul
its like
living in
another world
of truth
and
purest love
a paradise
often
sought
but never
truly
found
unashamedly
attracted
to your beauty
all my wishes
are blown
towards you
Published 8th Jan 2022
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8th Jan 2022 6:28am
8th Jan 2022 6:36am
🍃 ✨🍃✨🍃✨🍃✨🍃
You pen such a beautiful breeze, Colin!
I really really am over the moon you're back!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
You pen such a beautiful breeze, Colin!
I really really am over the moon you're back!
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
8th Jan 2022 5:20pm
8th Jan 2022 8:49pm
10th Jan 2022 4:55am
Cute love poem. I am curious why you choose to break the lines the way you did?
I never think about form when i write what you aee is unedited written how it comes from my peabrain
10th Jan 2022 6:20am
24th Jan 2022 6:08pm
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- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
28th Mar 2022 1:27am
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