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Profound in Surround
Profound in Surround
Words wind
Their way
Around
The subject
Of all being,
And then it is
The depth
Of all
Entices all
We're seeing.
All
Inclusive,
None elusive,
Omnipresent
Healing,
This is how
I feel
Right now
Just as my heart
She's stealing.
Take the very
Best of me
And leave
Not more
Behind,
And I'll not have
A drop
To give
Beyond the words
Defined.
Words wind
Their way
Around
The subject
Of all being,
And then it is
The depth
Of all
Entices all
We're seeing.
All
Inclusive,
None elusive,
Omnipresent
Healing,
This is how
I feel
Right now
Just as my heart
She's stealing.
Take the very
Best of me
And leave
Not more
Behind,
And I'll not have
A drop
To give
Beyond the words
Defined.
Published 6th Jan 2022
Author's Note
"Words don't have meaning, people do." Bruce Roach in the Roach Approach
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6th Jan 2022 11:17pm
Without words people wouldn't be half as interesting..... hahaha .... 😏... 😇
I am deeply impressed with the smooth silky seamlessness of your rhymes.... It's something that I don't have a talent for, yet I always marvel at those who do.
Very much enjoyed reading
I am deeply impressed with the smooth silky seamlessness of your rhymes.... It's something that I don't have a talent for, yet I always marvel at those who do.
Very much enjoyed reading
7th Jan 2022 1:04am
Words can be the lip balm of warm breathing....
I wish I could hear what you hear....I'm sure it has its own flush wind drops...sand dunes whispering the cascading presence of enertia taking a rest.
I wish I could hear what you hear....I'm sure it has its own flush wind drops...sand dunes whispering the cascading presence of enertia taking a rest.
