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Winter June
Winter June
The elegance of a rose displaced
On the border of delicacy
Makes a sultry strawberry
On a winter June
When her cocoa eyes
Glitter with morning dew
Where coffee trees unfold
In a flamenco fan of spring
The elegance of a rose displaced
On the border of delicacy
Makes a sultry strawberry
On a winter June
When her cocoa eyes
Glitter with morning dew
Where coffee trees unfold
In a flamenco fan of spring
Published 5th Jan 2022
| Edited 6th Jan 2022
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5th Jan 2022 11:08pm
Ohhh my! .... Sumptuous swoon worthy, John!!
I've totally fallen for this little gem, head over heels!! You've left a truly gorgeous indelible imprint.... Thank you.
🌹 - 💙
—Susan
xo
I've totally fallen for this little gem, head over heels!! You've left a truly gorgeous indelible imprint.... Thank you.
🌹 - 💙
—Susan
xo
5th Jan 2022 11:12pm
I haven't written many dedications to my coffee shop girls lately. Made a visit there today and the delicacy of this barista lady was a wonder to behold. Wrote this one mostly while at the coffee ship.
XoXo
John
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John
6th Jan 2022 11:21pm
7th Jan 2022 00:03am
SweetOblivion, deep gratitude my friend. Coming from as adept a sensual writer as you that means a lot.
XoXoXo
John
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John
7th Jan 2022 00:16am
Absolutely beautiful John. I was really immersed in your wonderful imagery line by line. You can definitely feel the inspiration from your barista lady imbued in it. ;) I have not had much time to read as of late but I am really glad I came across this one. :)
My two favorite lines;
When her cocoa eyes
Glitter with morning dew
My two favorite lines;
When her cocoa eyes
Glitter with morning dew
I am privileged to be read by as gifted a writer as you tonight. You really made my night and then some. I am especially overjoyed that the lines here left an impression on you. And that my beautiful barista lady was so vivid through my words. She is a delicate classic beauty. And her elegance is a wonder to behold. I hope that she lands an elegant gentleman or gentlewoman. Love that you enjoyed those lines my darling. And heartfelt thanks for your RL.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
27th Jan 2022 7:25am
27th Jan 2022 1:16pm
