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Happy New Year
Within the winter chills
the stuffy air went still
while struggling to breathe
the cold clogged my nose
If you ask
How did the new year holiday go
I would say
it was as nonsensical as a rascal
I never tried to grab its frayed fringe
Just let it elapse
as easy as it should be
No matter what
I wish you a happy new year my friends
the stuffy air went still
while struggling to breathe
the cold clogged my nose
If you ask
How did the new year holiday go
I would say
it was as nonsensical as a rascal
I never tried to grab its frayed fringe
Just let it elapse
as easy as it should be
No matter what
I wish you a happy new year my friends
Published 2nd Jan 2022
| Edited 3rd Jan 2022
Author's Note
the three-day new year holiday is sliding away...
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2nd Jan 2022 4:59am
2nd Jan 2022 5:21am
2nd Jan 2022 6:50am
2nd Jan 2022 9:57am
Dear R,
Lovely write. Stanza’s two and three sum up the holiday brilliantly for me. I just love how succinctly you’ve written this beautiful sentiment to one and all and may I wish you a healthy Happy New Year in return. Beautiful poem. H🌷
Lovely write. Stanza’s two and three sum up the holiday brilliantly for me. I just love how succinctly you’ve written this beautiful sentiment to one and all and may I wish you a healthy Happy New Year in return. Beautiful poem. H🌷
3rd Jan 2022 2:53am
Dear Honoria, thank you for such a beautiful comment, and thank you for the friendship and the always support. You have made my first working day more energetic. BIG SMILE!
Jasmine
Jasmine
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2nd Jan 2022 10:16am
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3rd Jan 2022 2:55am
4th Jan 2022 1:49am
Happy New Year, RoseJasmine. I know it's overrated but fun if you like Jools Holland!
4th Jan 2022 2:20am
I have checked about Jools Holand. I have never heard of him or his music before. Thank you for the nice feedback. This is amazing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UOau-y6qJHg
Anonymous
8th Jan 2022 2:39am
Hey Rose……Happy New Year! Wishing you many blessings upon you…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jan 2022 9:06am
Thank you my dear friend for the read. I wish you health, joy, and happiness.
Jasmine
Jasmine
9th Jan 2022 10:01pm
14th Jan 2022 4:57pm
Thank you my dear friend for the beautiful blessing. May all your wishes come true this year.
Jasmine
Jasmine
