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Orgasmic journey
Kiss me roughly and bite my lip,
Get the rope and I'll get the whip,
Lay down on the satin sheets,
So I can fulfill all your sexual needs.
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You touch my chest with your hands,
Looks to me you have this planned,
I look at you with an eager eye,
As I touch you on your inner thigh.
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You gasp as my finger lingers higher,
To that spot that I've always admired,
I begin caressing your sweet soft spot,
Your pleads suggest you don't do this a lot.
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I then tie your hands to my bed post
Your my guest so I will be your host,
I then position both your legs apart,
Like I'm preparing a work of art,
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I begin to lick your tits and suck them so,
Bite them roughly to let your passion show,
I proceed on down in between your thighs,
Before long,I feel my manhood rise.
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I stick my tongue between your pussy lips,
With each lick you thrust your hips,
Before to long,your soaked and Drenched,
This is where the foreplay ends.
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I pull my dick out and you grasp it tight,
You spread your lips to my delight,
I lower myself and enter you deeply,
In and out slowly but yet kind of eagerly.
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You gasp and I cry out in pleasure,
As I explode my seed,we orgasm together.
Get the rope and I'll get the whip,
Lay down on the satin sheets,
So I can fulfill all your sexual needs.
------------------------------------------------
You touch my chest with your hands,
Looks to me you have this planned,
I look at you with an eager eye,
As I touch you on your inner thigh.
------------------------------------------------
You gasp as my finger lingers higher,
To that spot that I've always admired,
I begin caressing your sweet soft spot,
Your pleads suggest you don't do this a lot.
-------------------------------------------------
I then tie your hands to my bed post
Your my guest so I will be your host,
I then position both your legs apart,
Like I'm preparing a work of art,
-------------------------------------------------
I begin to lick your tits and suck them so,
Bite them roughly to let your passion show,
I proceed on down in between your thighs,
Before long,I feel my manhood rise.
--------------------------------------------------
I stick my tongue between your pussy lips,
With each lick you thrust your hips,
Before to long,your soaked and Drenched,
This is where the foreplay ends.
---------------------------------------------------
I pull my dick out and you grasp it tight,
You spread your lips to my delight,
I lower myself and enter you deeply,
In and out slowly but yet kind of eagerly.
----------------------------------------------------
You gasp and I cry out in pleasure,
As I explode my seed,we orgasm together.
Published 7th Mar 2012
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7th Mar 2012 2:42pm
I love writing and at times I think I may have a little talent with it. Then I come across a topic like this and it reminds me that I'm still very amateur and need to expand my horizons. I wouldn't even know where to begin with something like this. Mad props, homie. Very nice.
7th Mar 2012 4:34pm
With writing,it's something beyond imagination.I feel what I write,therefore my emotions play a keen role in how my poems are created.write with the whole of you,if you hold back potentials your poems won't ever be the quality they should be.Thanks for reading bro!
11th Mar 2012 11:20am
This is a great poem, it has perfect rhythym anf flow, ans it sounds natural and not forced. It is penned down very vividly and I can almost see the hot and ertoic action. Very senusal. Enjoyed it!
10th Sep 2014 11:00am
Wow dude this is very erotic indeed and it expresses a lot of actions during sex.
It has that nice flow as well, it's as of you did this yourself and you began to write down what you experienced after the sex
Awesome stuff man, I'm not at all appalled cause in open to anything bro.
It has that nice flow as well, it's as of you did this yourself and you began to write down what you experienced after the sex
Awesome stuff man, I'm not at all appalled cause in open to anything bro.
10th Sep 2014 4:55pm
Thank you Brandon,I wrote this one when I actually felt some meaning to my life.I'm becoming more and more detached from all the shit I once knew.Thank you though for your words,I'm honored.
