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I Love My Body With Yours
I love
my body
with yours,
made beautiful
in your completing.
In the taste
of your fruits,
my temporal
earthly vessel
becomes whole.
my body
with yours,
made beautiful
in your completing.
In the taste
of your fruits,
my temporal
earthly vessel
becomes whole.
Published 29th Dec 2021
Author's Note
Becoming whole when with another is one possible definition of love.
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29th Dec 2021 1:48pm
30th Dec 2021 10:05pm
29th Dec 2021 2:12pm
An apt picture for a poem whose lines include the (delicious) words:
In the taste
of your fruits,
Makes an allegory of the satisfaction of a sexual hunger.
In the taste
of your fruits,
Makes an allegory of the satisfaction of a sexual hunger.
29th Dec 2021 4:40pm
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
29th Dec 2021 5:38pm
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30th Dec 2021 10:06pm
30th Dec 2021 2:51pm
30th Dec 2021 10:06pm
31st Dec 2021 12:44pm
As always, your writing stands out in the crowd. Simple, sweet and sexy. I already look forward to your next piece.
31st Dec 2021 11:07pm
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2nd Mar 2022 11:01am
When we find the perfect love we are compete and complementing. You are perfect itself. I love your passionate feelings.
KS
KS
3rd Mar 2022 3:27am
6th Sep 2022 00:59am
It's a union going back to the early days of creation.
A gift to be shared when together.
Only to continue as long as there's still agreement.
A gift to be shared when together.
Only to continue as long as there's still agreement.
8th Sep 2022 1:17pm
Yes and there are stories to be found in your phrase "as long as there's still agreement." Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
