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He Never Knew
He never knew
my silly girl grins or laughter
from the lightness in my heart.
He had no time
for knowing a flower,
scrambling hungrily to the next.
my silly girl grins or laughter
from the lightness in my heart.
He had no time
for knowing a flower,
scrambling hungrily to the next.
Published 28th Dec 2021
| Edited 6th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Thinking of my first boy and how differently we viewed our relationship.
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Dec 2022 10:45pm
29th Dec 2021 1:54am
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29th Dec 2021 7:14am
I am not one who has 'loved and left' girls in those circumstances, but the poem so clearly depicts in so few lines the differences in expectations of relationships between the sexes.
Your poem has inspired a rhyme on the theme, using your title as the poetry prompt, which I am about to post in this section.
Your poem has inspired a rhyme on the theme, using your title as the poetry prompt, which I am about to post in this section.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
29th Dec 2021 12:05pm
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2021 6:53am
Truer words were never spoken.
6th Sep 2022 1:05am
Discovery of each other in one another.
Initial fascination with excitement.
Enjoying the fun of being together.
Initial fascination with excitement.
Enjoying the fun of being together.
