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Vividly Animal
My reflection dances
in the window
facing the night.
I am so vividly animal
in movement
and form.
My thighs flex
in recoil from his
rhythmic dance.
My eyes rise
toward the ceiling
at the moment of his coming.
If animals can pray,
I thank creation for
this most precious life.
in the window
facing the night.
I am so vividly animal
in movement
and form.
My thighs flex
in recoil from his
rhythmic dance.
My eyes rise
toward the ceiling
at the moment of his coming.
If animals can pray,
I thank creation for
this most precious life.
Published 6th Jan 2022
Author's Note
Seeing myself reflected in a dark window reminded me of my animal existence.
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A vivid write. What can look more on-turningly animal than seeing one's naked form reflected in an unlit window pane? Only a cheap version of having mirrors on the ceiling/walls but just as enjoyable to see.
10th Jan 2022 11:39am
6th Jan 2022 9:24pm
I enjoy how your poems sometimes contain the image of seeing your own reflection. Very hot!
6th Jan 2022 11:15pm
7th Jan 2022 00:24am
2nd Mar 2022 10:54am
Intuition and instinct work hand in hand. Great expression of such an small impact.
Love
KS
Love
KS
2nd Mar 2022 10:56am
Intuition and instinct work hand in hand Great expression of such an small impact.
Love
KS
Love
KS
6th Sep 2022 00:50am
The truth is contained in the physical reflection.
Some may find it difficult to accept looking at how they have changed over time.
**As for you, it looks like you have fully embraced it.
** No pun intended
Some may find it difficult to accept looking at how they have changed over time.
**As for you, it looks like you have fully embraced it.
** No pun intended
