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Familiar Voices
trapped in a crowd of faces and hands
chattering words and making demands
tired of smiling, I need to get away
(wrap me in inky black velvet)
my only strength is my will to breathe
(reach for me in the shadows)
I’m waiting, lonely in the empty dark
waiting for their songs
to touch me
familiar voices pull me off the ledge
familiar voices soothe my weary soul
familiar voices sing me back to the light
familiar voices bring me back to whole
chattering words and making demands
tired of smiling, I need to get away
(wrap me in inky black velvet)
my only strength is my will to breathe
(reach for me in the shadows)
I’m waiting, lonely in the empty dark
waiting for their songs
to touch me
familiar voices pull me off the ledge
familiar voices soothe my weary soul
familiar voices sing me back to the light
familiar voices bring me back to whole
Author's Note
A love letter to musician and poet friends out here in the ether who keep me company and pick me up when times are rough. I appreciate you all and the familiarity of your "voices", whether sung or written.
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Re. Familiar Voices
21st Dec 2021 5:33am
Dear K,
There isn’t one word gone amiss in this poem. I loved the creative thoughtfulness, kindness, appreciation for everyone, rhythm, and especially the rejuvenation of self through the friendships and feedback on site.
Brava and flicking my bic (or turning on my phone light as is done now a days…I’m so old…) in awed appreciation of this most excellent homage and poem. Xx
H🌷
There isn’t one word gone amiss in this poem. I loved the creative thoughtfulness, kindness, appreciation for everyone, rhythm, and especially the rejuvenation of self through the friendships and feedback on site.
Brava and flicking my bic (or turning on my phone light as is done now a days…I’m so old…) in awed appreciation of this most excellent homage and poem. Xx
H🌷
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Re: Re. Familiar Voices
1st Jan 2022 1:30pm
Dear H,
Thank you for so many beautiful comments.... and for being such a presence in my chorus of familiar voices. I finally got the song version done; hope you like it!
❤k
Thank you for so many beautiful comments.... and for being such a presence in my chorus of familiar voices. I finally got the song version done; hope you like it!
❤k
Re: Re. Familiar Voices
2nd Jan 2022 00:44am
Re. Familiar Voices
23rd Dec 2021 4:48pm
Now that I’ve heard your skill in music making, I can only hear this in your voice and song as I read it… Very impacting! And a touching message as well 🌟
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1st Jan 2022 1:32pm
Re. Familiar Voices
30th Dec 2021 9:06pm
BT, Your lyrics are a beautiful tribute to the impactful artistic strangers who helped, supported, and encouraged you.
This wonderful metrical write resonates with every measured word.
A pure melody of brokentitanium verse composed with harmonious unyielding emotions.
Expressed brilliantly in song.
You are in tune with your emotions.
Your words of ''Familiar Voices'' are our chorus.
Sing this song beautiful lady!
signed,
your #1 groupie
This wonderful metrical write resonates with every measured word.
A pure melody of brokentitanium verse composed with harmonious unyielding emotions.
Expressed brilliantly in song.
You are in tune with your emotions.
Your words of ''Familiar Voices'' are our chorus.
Sing this song beautiful lady!
signed,
your #1 groupie
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Re: Re. Familiar Voices
1st Jan 2022 1:33pm
Wow, thank you... I did indeed sing this song! And now you can hear it too. 😊
❤k
❤k
Re. Familiar Voices
1st Jan 2022 8:22am
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1st Jan 2022 1:35pm
Re. Familiar Voices
1st Jan 2022 4:27pm
well done my sister :-)
most of my friends passed on at an early age..
but I hear them speak to me occasionally.. mostly when I’m in a quiet place.
OG Respect.
most of my friends passed on at an early age..
but I hear them speak to me occasionally.. mostly when I’m in a quiet place.
OG Respect.
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Re: Re. Familiar Voices
1st Jan 2022 9:34pm
Thank you for reading, listening, commenting. I'm sorry for your losses, but happy to see you here. Peace. 🙏
❤k
❤k
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3rd Jan 2022 2:15am
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Re. Familiar Voices
8th Jan 2022 10:31pm
Beautiful and professional quality. A++ Could listen over and over. LOL, (O)
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9th Jan 2022 00:05am
Re. Familiar Voices
15th Nov 2022 2:26am
This one is delightfully crafted and really shows off your voice and yes I am now stalking you, I cant believe Ive missed so much
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15th Nov 2022 11:39am