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Without a Trace
as she slept
he fled home
then got a ticket
and cought a plane
he couldn't
call her phone
he loved her but
it was too late
his narrow escape
would be blown
and he'd be arrested
for robbing that bank
he could feel it
deep in his bones
he would forever be
haunted by her face
and her, by the
combat zone
her man created
outside that bank
the job was his last
before taking it slow
but two dead cops
changed his fate
she never forgot
waking up alone
without a goodbye
without a trace
he fled home
then got a ticket
and cought a plane
he couldn't
call her phone
he loved her but
it was too late
his narrow escape
would be blown
and he'd be arrested
for robbing that bank
he could feel it
deep in his bones
he would forever be
haunted by her face
and her, by the
combat zone
her man created
outside that bank
the job was his last
before taking it slow
but two dead cops
changed his fate
she never forgot
waking up alone
without a goodbye
without a trace
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Re. Without a Trace
17th Dec 2021 7:09pm
Bad choices can change our fate and the fate of others forever. Some things you cannot come back from and everyone suffers because of it; the pain and heartbreak can last a lifetime. That is the message I am taking away from this.
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17th Dec 2021 7:20pm
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18th Dec 2021 5:03am
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Re: Re. Without a Trace
17th Dec 2021 7:22pm
Re. Without a Trace
17th Dec 2021 8:20pm
Sometimes you wish you could have one big 'do over' because of all the painful ruins and heartbreak that are left scattered in the wake of bad choices /actions.....
Poignant piece, W.
🌹 - 💙
B
Poignant piece, W.
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re: Re. Without a Trace
18th Dec 2021 4:39am
Thank you for the read and for really giving it some thought. I always appreciate your comments and support. You are the best!
Re. Without a Trace
It's sad that though the man loved his woman very much, his disappearance without announcement would leave her confused and may be plant seeds of doubt and grief.... She may be lead to believe that he didn't love her and just used her up....
Very nice poem, dear poet.... So well composed and engaging....
Well done! 👏👏👏
Very nice poem, dear poet.... So well composed and engaging....
Well done! 👏👏👏
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Re: Re. Without a Trace
18th Dec 2021 4:43am
Thank you for the in depth read and great comment. You are the best. This one is definitely not my favorite poem but I'm glad it was enjoyed. I'm happy to see you around again 🥰
Re. Without a Trace
17th Dec 2021 10:15pm
Damn. That’s a fateful end for all parties involved. I think people do things without ever considering the ripple effect.
Great tale of caution.
Great tale of caution.
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Re: Re. Without a Trace
18th Dec 2021 4:44am
Thank you for taking the time to read and for your complements. I'm really happy you stopped by. I'll have to check your stuff out too soon!
Re. Without a Trace
18th Dec 2021 2:53am
Hey Rainy
So at first I thought he died. It wasn't till the ending where I understood he got caught.
The whole got a ticket and caught a plane. I thought it was a metaphor for the
ride back to heaven. Well done mister:)
So at first I thought he died. It wasn't till the ending where I understood he got caught.
The whole got a ticket and caught a plane. I thought it was a metaphor for the
ride back to heaven. Well done mister:)
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Re: Re. Without a Trace
18th Dec 2021 4:46am
If you enjoyed it, it must be decent! Thank you so much for stopping by. Always happy to read your words!