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Angel
Angel
If one day I say
Goodbye
Will you cry
Angel
If one day I lay
Down and die
Will you weep for me
Angel
If I told you
How much I love you
Although we never met
Will you laugh at me
Angel
Will you say
A little prayer
Before I close this page
And say goodbye
Angel
I know you are going now
To another woman’s arms
Someone you love
Much more than me
Angel
My wish will never come true
To you I am a nobody
But I can dream…
Can’t I?
If one day I say
Goodbye
Will you cry
Angel
If one day I lay
Down and die
Will you weep for me
Angel
If I told you
How much I love you
Although we never met
Will you laugh at me
Angel
Will you say
A little prayer
Before I close this page
And say goodbye
Angel
I know you are going now
To another woman’s arms
Someone you love
Much more than me
Angel
My wish will never come true
To you I am a nobody
But I can dream…
Can’t I?
Published 5th Mar 2012
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5th Mar 2012 10:59pm
5th Mar 2012 11:26pm
I know you are going now
To another woman’s arms
Someone you love
Much more than me
Well grace , more fool he , and that's me being polite about it , nice heartfelt poem grace :)
To another woman’s arms
Someone you love
Much more than me
Well grace , more fool he , and that's me being polite about it , nice heartfelt poem grace :)
5th Mar 2012 11:40pm
I know Paul: A sad case. Thanks. For everything; reading, commenting, encouraging...NYear's eve...
6th Mar 2012 4:59am
6th Mar 2012 11:19am
Oh dear...wow. I am sorry to hear that it sounded like you...cos its not a pretty situation to be in.
Thank you for reading and commenting though.
Thank you for reading and commenting though.
6th Mar 2012 11:11am
..painful Grace.
Full of emotion.
But a shame.
I hope he is not still thought of as "Angel".
Full of emotion.
But a shame.
I hope he is not still thought of as "Angel".
6th Mar 2012 11:25am
Sometimes you just have to bear with it. One day he my realise that I am there waiting...or maybe not. Wish I can get out of the deep deep well...Thanks MrAlptraum for reading and commenting. So kind.
6th Mar 2012 4:49pm
These verses convey disappointment, frustration and sadness. Verses of loneliness.
The poems that arise from the strong emotions like, love, hate and pain, are always the most evocative and introspective. They are what I prefer.
Try to raise your spirit, Grace. There are many people around willing to love a woman sweet and smart as you. I'm sure.
The poems that arise from the strong emotions like, love, hate and pain, are always the most evocative and introspective. They are what I prefer.
Try to raise your spirit, Grace. There are many people around willing to love a woman sweet and smart as you. I'm sure.
7th Mar 2012 9:49am
Thank you dear Luca for the comforting words. I hope someday mine will come true. Always we pine for someone not so attainable. But I am waiting, as always.
13th Mar 2012 11:21pm
Your description of the angel had enough mystery that I was wondering what the relationship was to the reader up until "to another woman's arms." Nicely done.
14th Mar 2012 00:56am
