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Blown away
https://youtube.com/watch?v=rfdpxDhSetA Kings of Leon : Wave
Please listen while reading, thanks for looking.
Melodic music plays
igniting nostalgia In bursts of pain
piercing longing
for that which is unattainable
thus far in my life.
a familiar saddness takes over
I remember I love this song and
all the heartache it brings with it
I die a little inside each time
I hear it play
knowing I shouldn’t listen
but do anyway…
Please listen while reading, thanks for looking.
Melodic music plays
igniting nostalgia In bursts of pain
piercing longing
for that which is unattainable
thus far in my life.
a familiar saddness takes over
I remember I love this song and
all the heartache it brings with it
I die a little inside each time
I hear it play
knowing I shouldn’t listen
but do anyway…
Published 5th Dec 2021
| Edited 27th Jul 2022
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5th Dec 2021 9:53am
Hello Ms. Broom. :)))
This deeply impacts my heart and soul,
a multi dimensional masterpiece made from elements that emerge from the surface of the ether.
Magic.
If feels like searching for the light amongst shadows,
like being taken into the cold horizon of the falling sun,
where light evades and shadows captivate.
And yet... Beauty still emerges.
Beautiful.
This deeply impacts my heart and soul,
a multi dimensional masterpiece made from elements that emerge from the surface of the ether.
Magic.
If feels like searching for the light amongst shadows,
like being taken into the cold horizon of the falling sun,
where light evades and shadows captivate.
And yet... Beauty still emerges.
Beautiful.
Hello C,
Just feeling the burn bro, tired of the same ol same ol. Life is different now, back in the day you could just pack up take off and find yourself, unless you have money lots of it you can’t afford to do that anymore, and plus there’s so many crazy people now out in the world it’s ridiculous. Fuck around take a trip to the fucking mountains never come down a motherfucker might kill me and make a hat out of my fucking ass!
Lmao!
Thanks for stopping by
Love always
BFF
Jackie xoxox♥️🌹
Just feeling the burn bro, tired of the same ol same ol. Life is different now, back in the day you could just pack up take off and find yourself, unless you have money lots of it you can’t afford to do that anymore, and plus there’s so many crazy people now out in the world it’s ridiculous. Fuck around take a trip to the fucking mountains never come down a motherfucker might kill me and make a hat out of my fucking ass!
Lmao!
Thanks for stopping by
Love always
BFF
Jackie xoxox♥️🌹
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5th Dec 2021 4:05pm
Yeah, I hate emotional pain Relic it’s the worst. Thanks for sharing your thoughts
I feel you bro ♥️
Always
Jackie xx
Thanks for the song.
I actually have many that break me. Sometimes I need the music to feel through whatever pain is currently hurting.
I feel you bro ♥️
Always
Jackie xx
Thanks for the song.
I actually have many that break me. Sometimes I need the music to feel through whatever pain is currently hurting.
5th Dec 2021 7:28pm
Boy if you didn't nail nostalgia ( THIRD time I've heard/read that word today ). Music is one of the greatest forces on earth and will move even the most hardened of hearts to return our youth quicker than anything else.
5th Dec 2021 7:52pm
Hello Ava, yeah it’s a fact of life. We change, we grow and learn wisdom.
Miss you beautiful lady xoxox
Jackie 😘
Miss you beautiful lady xoxox
Jackie 😘
13th Dec 2021 2:02am
6th Dec 2021 5:11am
Dear J,
“ I wanna runaway
become whole again… “ where you going? Can I tag along? I loved this poem for its honesty and how well you shared just how difficult life can be. Music can soothe the soul but it can also make it restless and lately I’d love to fly like an eagle.
Great write. H🌷
“ I wanna runaway
become whole again… “ where you going? Can I tag along? I loved this poem for its honesty and how well you shared just how difficult life can be. Music can soothe the soul but it can also make it restless and lately I’d love to fly like an eagle.
Great write. H🌷
Hello H🌹
For me this poem is about the fact that my life has stayed the same for years. I wanna runaway from it all but can’t, because life is hard and there is nowhere for me to get lost and figure out who i really am.
In my mind i picture myself on a long long road trip by myself. Like I don’t wanna babysit I don’t wanna worry about bills I don’t wanna clean a big house or deal with an alcoholic boyfried because I can’t afford to live on my own, which in it of itself makes me sick . Looking back to all I’ve ever had that I had to get all my own and lost. nobody’s ever gave me a fucking thing , i’ve been independent since 12 true story . I just wanna live off the land live in nature get away from all the negativity and darkness in the world, and especially in my own life. idk I am just so tired if doing nothing..
Sometimes when I hear certain music it takes me so far back in time it makes me sad because I look around and I see I have nothing to show in all my years on earth.
loves you H 🌹
Always sis
Jackie xoxox♥️🌹
For me this poem is about the fact that my life has stayed the same for years. I wanna runaway from it all but can’t, because life is hard and there is nowhere for me to get lost and figure out who i really am.
In my mind i picture myself on a long long road trip by myself. Like I don’t wanna babysit I don’t wanna worry about bills I don’t wanna clean a big house or deal with an alcoholic boyfried because I can’t afford to live on my own, which in it of itself makes me sick . Looking back to all I’ve ever had that I had to get all my own and lost. nobody’s ever gave me a fucking thing , i’ve been independent since 12 true story . I just wanna live off the land live in nature get away from all the negativity and darkness in the world, and especially in my own life. idk I am just so tired if doing nothing..
Sometimes when I hear certain music it takes me so far back in time it makes me sad because I look around and I see I have nothing to show in all my years on earth.
loves you H 🌹
Always sis
Jackie xoxox♥️🌹
6th Dec 2021 8:22pm
Dear J,
I so get this. However, I might beg to differ in that every time you submit a poem you inspire those you touch and who’ve had the privilege of reading your heart through your writes. Xx H
I so get this. However, I might beg to differ in that every time you submit a poem you inspire those you touch and who’ve had the privilege of reading your heart through your writes. Xx H
7th Dec 2021 11:51pm
