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Knitting shackles
Nervously desires knit shackles,
I squeeze my hands and thoughts flow
tearing down control heavy curtains,
how I am so close to you now.
Passionate body burns and burns,
wants your embrace, like captivity
the fire in me is enough for two of you,
I want my knees worn out to pain.
Breath, blood, disorder of movement,
and droplets of sweat are living water
to catch the reflection in each other's eyes,
and to say in languor only "Yes!".
You squeeze your hands around my neck,
bending my lower back, I want to scream
I do not own my consciousness now,
and I feel the seal of your passion ...
I squeeze my hands and thoughts flow
tearing down control heavy curtains,
how I am so close to you now.
Passionate body burns and burns,
wants your embrace, like captivity
the fire in me is enough for two of you,
I want my knees worn out to pain.
Breath, blood, disorder of movement,
and droplets of sweat are living water
to catch the reflection in each other's eyes,
and to say in languor only "Yes!".
You squeeze your hands around my neck,
bending my lower back, I want to scream
I do not own my consciousness now,
and I feel the seal of your passion ...
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Re. Knitting shackles
19th Nov 2021 8:09pm
In the throes of passion every sense is heightened, in pain, in euphoric bliss, devouring one another...sublime dear poet...loving on the metaphors, knit shackles, heavy curtains, living waters...definitely grabbed my attention here k xo
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19th Nov 2021 8:31pm
Oh yes! I love that nervous anticipation with every sense on overload, bound by the sweet pain and pleasure of euphoric bliss in the throes. To be devoured completely in sweet submission. I am so happy you like the metaphors and I love grabbing your attention. ;) xo 🩸⛓️
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I love a woman reduced to her knees,
Bloodied out of passion
Penetrated harshly
Almost passed out
Filled, violated
Choked nearly unconscious,
Her only demand
BIG BRUTAL LIKE
Bloodied out of passion
Penetrated harshly
Almost passed out
Filled, violated
Choked nearly unconscious,
Her only demand
BIG BRUTAL LIKE
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19th Nov 2021 9:28pm
Oh yes! What could be better than a woman on her knees filled with desire, right PS? Extreme passion really gets the blood flowing. How that power excites, to be penetrated deeply into the body and soul. Choked, filled so completely you ache nearly losing consciousness. Her only demand to fulfill his deepest darkest most taboo desires, becoming her intense need. xo 🩸⛓️
Re. Knitting shackles
19th Nov 2021 8:52pm
Awesome write young lady, the anticipation, oain, loss of control and power. Very erotic read, super hot job
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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19th Nov 2021 9:40pm
I love that anticipation of what's to come. The total lack of control bound by shackles completely dominated by someone else's power and desires. Overloading the senses. I am so happy you thought it was awesome and super hot. Thanks so much Ron. ;) xo 🩸⛓️
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To consent at times to the darkness is the only way to see and experience the light. Yes through worn out knees, pain and pleasure commingles with sweat reviving it into something that's greedily wanted, needed. When movement is consent and consent is to punished, long and drawn out for being such a naughty one. Tight work Lil X
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19th Nov 2021 10:46pm
Oh definitely! The darkness can be beautiful and to submit to it is to really know you are alive. To truly experience the full depth of pleasure you need to be open to the pain. How they commingle igniting the deepest passions and darkest desires when you consent to being punished. You are getting me excited all over again with the thoughts of being punished for being naughty, especially in a long and drawn out session. ;) xo 🩸⛓️
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19th Nov 2021 10:57pm
I love heating up the page for you. And I am really glad you could feel the heat with me. Just needed to share some dark desires, pain, and pleasure. ;) xo 🩸⛓️
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I absolutely love leaving you breathless sultry Selina. ;) How wonderful it is to lose yourself, someone taking over your consciousness so that you forget all of the difficult stuff and just feel at least for a while. Thank you so much for the comment. xo 🩸⛓️
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20th Nov 2021 00:29am
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20th Nov 2021 1:39pm
I do love burning you up Francisco and bathing in the flames. I want to feel all of the intensity of the passion and submit to it completely. Thank you so much for the comment. xo 🩸⛓️
Re. Knitting shackles
20th Nov 2021 1:12pm
You were absolutely right, I love this spill kristina thoughts become desire, desire becomes cravings
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20th Nov 2021 1:44pm
Some things feel so right even if they might seem so wrong. ;) Oh yes! thoughts do become desires and the powerful needs to fulfill those cravings. Cravings to be dominated and enact the deepest darkest and most taboo fantasies... xo 🩸⛓️
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2021 9:47pm
To be able to take forbidden dark desires to levels even if it's a fantasy can be euphoria
for the mind and soul. :)
Ab
for the mind and soul. :)
Ab
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21st Nov 2021 9:56pm
I do love an Alpha Beast to help make my dark desires of domination and submission come true. To fulfill those deepest darkest needs that can truly be euphoria for the mind and soul. I really appreciate you stopping in to give me your thoughts. xo 🩸⛓️
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Anonymous
21st Nov 2021 10:02pm
It was my pleasure stopping in and giving you my beastly thoughts.
We're all animals , might as well be animals. :)
We're all animals , might as well be animals. :)
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Re. Knitting shackles
21st Nov 2021 10:16pm
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21st Nov 2021 10:39pm
I have played poker before, well strip poker anyway. I raise you one short black dress and some high heel boots. So happy you dig the ink. ;) xo 🩸⛓️ Thanks for the 20...
Re. Knitting shackles
24th Nov 2021 4:08pm
Cheese and crust, that was delicious.
"I do not own my consciousness now," I dig the complete and total submission in this line.
Intoxicating write Kristina. Bravo!
"I do not own my consciousness now," I dig the complete and total submission in this line.
Intoxicating write Kristina. Bravo!
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24th Nov 2021 5:54pm
Oh my dear Wally, I love sharing the cheese and crust with you. I can make a mean pizza with all the toppings of me. ;) To be pulled from my own mind and immersed into the deepest desires and fantasies of another. To become and fulfill those needs that so often remain buried is truly intoxicating. xo 🩸⛓️
Re. Knitting shackles
26th Nov 2021 6:05pm
I really love the pure, classy BDSM references here. The image is one of passion and desire. A relationship with no limits and complete surrender. Bravo!
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26th Nov 2021 9:06pm
Thank you so much for stopping by Tim, I love to be pure and classy... ;) Sharing images with you of passion and dark desires to be handled roughly. That insane need to be forcefully pulled out of my mind, giving myself over in complete submission to be the fulfillment of all those deepest fantasies no matter how taboo and to feel everything... xo 🩸⛓️
Re. Knitting shackles
31st Dec 2021 3:27am
This is pure art of the highest order. I loved swimming in the sensuality you conjurer with expertise. The magical passion here sings to me of love and hot desire. You took me there girl.
XoXoXo
John
XoXoXo
John
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31st Dec 2021 5:11pm
I find myself struggling to find words that can express my appreciation. To be thoughts of as art is truly wonderful to me. I love that you could take this swim with me. That you could share in my passion which definitely is imbued with hot desires. To take you there is a gift. ;) xo 🩸⛓️