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whisper
my tenderness stirs within me
I'm just a shy girl
gentle in my approach
witness the day
with sweet caresses
touches this little sunflower
flowing with wind
delicate of soul
enchanted by life
kind spirit lilting on the aether
can you feel my soul smiling at you
on a warm summer day?
seeking honesty
a truth of soul
to understand me
Published 18th Nov 2021
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18th Nov 2021 1:08pm
That's so beautiful the light to the darkness
Great poem. Left me smiling
Love and light
Ron xx
Great poem. Left me smiling
Love and light
Ron xx
18th Nov 2021 1:20pm
hey there dearest Ron I think we are multifaceted this is a side of me too thank you my friend for the love❤
18th Nov 2021 1:30pm
The Brightest and most beautiful Diamonds have many facets, so beautiful Diamond Shine on
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
18th Nov 2021 3:17pm
18th Nov 2021 3:18pm
delicate of soul enchanted by life my favorite line. Beautifully written. 💜💜💜
19th Nov 2021 3:03am
This is so lovely to read.
A definite whisper.
You do both sides quite superbly.
Loved the last stanza!!!
A definite whisper.
You do both sides quite superbly.
Loved the last stanza!!!
23rd Nov 2021 9:01pm
Wonderful piece crim.
"seeking honesty
a truth of soul
to understand me" I loved that closing stanza, it's modest and profound.
Well done.
"seeking honesty
a truth of soul
to understand me" I loved that closing stanza, it's modest and profound.
Well done.
