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That'll Teach Him
The lady let him go
but the dude just wouldn't leave
was crying outside her door
about his heart and his sleeve
his moaning was making her sick
she desperately wanted some relief,
the lady loaded up her rifle
and blew his heart out of his sleeve.
What a fucking mess.
but the dude just wouldn't leave
was crying outside her door
about his heart and his sleeve
his moaning was making her sick
she desperately wanted some relief,
the lady loaded up her rifle
and blew his heart out of his sleeve.
What a fucking mess.
Published 16th Nov 2021
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16th Nov 2021 8:47pm
16th Nov 2021 11:09pm
17th Nov 2021 00:34am
17th Nov 2021 1:05am
I mean, c'mon!! ... Why do they insist you go that extra mile, always......*wink
Really excellent work, nik
Your picture really adds to the impact!
👌🏻
Really excellent work, nik
Your picture really adds to the impact!
👌🏻
19th Nov 2021 10:59am
Dear N,
I can’t…I don’t…I’m…simply gobsmacked by the perfection of this. I absolutely love every single line of the poem. Wit. Pragmatism. In your face brilliant!!!! Top shelf write! H🌷
I can’t…I don’t…I’m…simply gobsmacked by the perfection of this. I absolutely love every single line of the poem. Wit. Pragmatism. In your face brilliant!!!! Top shelf write! H🌷
22nd Nov 2021 9:18pm
Damn!
Well, thank goodness he wore on his sleeve. Now he'll just need a helping hand.
Nicely penned nikki.
Well, thank goodness he wore on his sleeve. Now he'll just need a helping hand.
Nicely penned nikki.
2nd Jan 2022 2:27pm
Well, We have to cut off the umbilical chord to save mother and child.
Separation is painful but reality demands it.
Ks
Separation is painful but reality demands it.
Ks
