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Quest for Elusive Happiness
Left alone, disregarded, shunned
once labeled the only one
verdant garden now fallow ground
ecstasy echoes cease to resound
Yearning for love from once dead lover
obfuscated desire made clear undercover
use subterfuge in lust-driven pursuit
release sensuous songs, take them off mute
seize ostensible amor verdadero
escape the tedious life straight and narrow
loose steel bond forged in devotion, tempered in resentment
forget heart, soul, whole being who impedes your contentment
once labeled the only one
verdant garden now fallow ground
ecstasy echoes cease to resound
Yearning for love from once dead lover
obfuscated desire made clear undercover
use subterfuge in lust-driven pursuit
release sensuous songs, take them off mute
seize ostensible amor verdadero
escape the tedious life straight and narrow
loose steel bond forged in devotion, tempered in resentment
forget heart, soul, whole being who impedes your contentment
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 16th Nov 2021
| Edited 17th Nov 2021
Author's Note
To quote Tina Turner, "What's love got to do with it?"
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Quest for Elusive Happiness
16th Nov 2021 7:06pm
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17th Nov 2021 3:52am
Cheeres, William! I agree 100%. Love has everything to do with everything.
Re. Quest for Elusive Happiness
I love your creativity. The message along the left is so important, to truly love completely you must learn to love yourself. But I could also feel the intense sadness, heartbreak, and loneliness in your words. The quest for love can be a difficult one and a love lost can be the most painful of all. Incredible writing with so many messages contained within about the trials, difficulties, and love in relationships.
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Thank you so much, Kristina. I am thrilled that you appreciate all the messages in the piece. Loving oneself is so important to maintaining sanity in the game of love. It took me years to understand that happiness is a choice and that I can't make that choice for others. You're an inspiration, my goddess friend❣🌹
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17th Nov 2021 3:32pm
I'm also on this quest..... the ability to love myself well is usually quite elusive indeed.
Beautiful write, very creative and... sad. 😥
❤k
Beautiful write, very creative and... sad. 😥
❤k
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23rd Nov 2021 1:40am
K, I truly appreciate your comment and I am ecstatic that you enjoy the poem. We are kindred in our quest for self love. Believe me when I say you are an anazing, multi talented lady.❣🌹
Re. Quest for Elusive Happiness
18th Nov 2021 4:18am
Great. If you can't love yourself, you can't love anyone. I love your mixed feelings and ultimate rest with self love. I have yet to read your poetry.
Kris.
Kris.
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23rd Nov 2021 1:44am
Thank you so much, Kris. Amen to your assessment of loving oneself. I am glad for your visit and wonderful comment.
Re. Quest for Elusive Happiness
18th Nov 2021 7:03am
Dear GW,
Every line a poem unto itself. Creative and encouraging and downright lovely poetry.
Naturally, I wouldn’t dream of playing favorites but if I did this line was fabulous. “ use subterfuge in lust-driven pursuit”. Standing ovation.
H🌷
Every line a poem unto itself. Creative and encouraging and downright lovely poetry.
Naturally, I wouldn’t dream of playing favorites but if I did this line was fabulous. “ use subterfuge in lust-driven pursuit”. Standing ovation.
H🌷
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23rd Nov 2021 1:49am
Dearest, Honoria
You have the unique quality of truly lifting my spirit with each word of your comments. I am psyched that you enjoyed the piece and especially the passage you reference.❣🌹
You have the unique quality of truly lifting my spirit with each word of your comments. I am psyched that you enjoyed the piece and especially the passage you reference.❣🌹
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My lovely lovely friend, - 🐻 💞
There are times when losing sight of just how truly amazing and incredible you are can wreck terrible havoc on a mind body and soul. Retaining and continually practicing self love is a lifelong process, in my opinion. It's a struggle some days... There will always be challenges and issues to overcome within longstanding loving relationships that might cause self doubt to sear, deep.... However, it's those times that we must dig in and find that inner badass (who sometimes can get lost in mundane BS.) that IS fully committed to love of self, possibly allowing for a much needed reminding...
Please know that you have a particular BRILLIANT luster, dear poet. You're a SUPERNOVA.... always.
This acrostic really hit me hard, with it's smart, moving, raw but tender openness...
Just, outstanding, BB....sincerely.
Much love and deep respect - 💙
🌹 - 🐻 - 🐰 - 💋
xoxo
B
There are times when losing sight of just how truly amazing and incredible you are can wreck terrible havoc on a mind body and soul. Retaining and continually practicing self love is a lifelong process, in my opinion. It's a struggle some days... There will always be challenges and issues to overcome within longstanding loving relationships that might cause self doubt to sear, deep.... However, it's those times that we must dig in and find that inner badass (who sometimes can get lost in mundane BS.) that IS fully committed to love of self, possibly allowing for a much needed reminding...
Please know that you have a particular BRILLIANT luster, dear poet. You're a SUPERNOVA.... always.
This acrostic really hit me hard, with it's smart, moving, raw but tender openness...
Just, outstanding, BB....sincerely.
Much love and deep respect - 💙
🌹 - 🐻 - 🐰 - 💋
xoxo
B
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27th Dec 2021 9:56pm
Wow...I am speechless. Lady Blue. Your tender heart makes me feel so accepted and cared for. You are marvelous poet...and a bright star in my sky. Thank you so much sweet goddess, BB❣🌹
Re. Quest for Elusive Happiness
26th Dec 2021 8:00pm
sigh.
Amazing rhyme / rhythm.
As for the message, it speaks for itself. :) the path to love that resounds seems endless, love unreachable, yet... it is there. only, various lessons stand in between, sometimes it is very boring to go through this
Amazing rhyme / rhythm.
As for the message, it speaks for itself. :) the path to love that resounds seems endless, love unreachable, yet... it is there. only, various lessons stand in between, sometimes it is very boring to go through this
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27th Dec 2021 9:58pm
Aaron, I am thrilled with your hopeful response. I am glad that you enjoy the poem.