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Sticky Haiku
Sweet-craving tongue, licks
scours honey-painted spoon
amber ecstasy
scours honey-painted spoon
amber ecstasy
Published 15th Nov 2021
Author's Note
I cooked up my first batch of sweet/salty honey roasted peanuts. They are'nt too bad. Cleaning up the spoon measuring the honey was delicious.
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15th Nov 2021 11:03pm
15th Nov 2021 11:11pm
I'm glad you like like this one. Haiiku/Senryu are one of my favorite forms as well. There's real real beauty and power being able to write anjh impactful message in just 17 syllables...illustrates well the power of a single word. 've always been goloso as they say in Spanish.
Cheers, AP!
Cheers, AP!
15th Nov 2021 11:45pm
16th Nov 2021 00:15am
15th Nov 2021 11:52pm
16th Nov 2021 00:18am
Right? I am glad for the visit, Soledad and I'm doubly glad that you find the piece so tasty ❣🌹
16th Nov 2021 00:11am
16th Nov 2021 00:23am
Thank you so much, LJ. I am thrilled that you like the piece that yoh enjoyed the flow. I always live your visit an I apologize that I haven't been reciprocating of late. I'm starting to feel that poetic yearning again 😍
16th Nov 2021 1:08am
16th Nov 2021 1:46am
Thank you so much, NighGoddess. I am glad you like the piece
It's funny I debated on whether to call it a Haiku or Senryu. I opted to call it because of the natural nature of honey,
It's funny I debated on whether to call it a Haiku or Senryu. I opted to call it because of the natural nature of honey,
16th Nov 2021 1:57am
16th Nov 2021 7:15pm
So very sweet! I love the visual... I could not only taste the amber ecstasy but see it's gorgeous silky glow as well.
16th Nov 2021 7:20pm
Dearest, Kristina
It is high praise indeed when the reader can see and taste my words😍 I am thrillled that you like this piece❣🌹
It is high praise indeed when the reader can see and taste my words😍 I am thrillled that you like this piece❣🌹
16th Nov 2021 11:50pm
