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fires lit
it was cold and she invited me in
I said one, she insisted on two
we know the rules
said the one that was cool
a few led to more
curbed to the floor
gazing at skies
thru soft satin eyes
the moon held us up
leading lost souls astray
fires, soon lit
where kisses had set
roaming the ruins
underneath unnamed statues
arts of destruction
captured within time
within moments
fleeting faster than the night
nestled into the warmth
steadfast, unwavering
enthralling the elixer of her thrill
awoken by the seagulls
warning us
it's soon about to rain
I said one, she insisted on two
we know the rules
said the one that was cool
a few led to more
curbed to the floor
gazing at skies
thru soft satin eyes
the moon held us up
leading lost souls astray
fires, soon lit
where kisses had set
roaming the ruins
underneath unnamed statues
arts of destruction
captured within time
within moments
fleeting faster than the night
nestled into the warmth
steadfast, unwavering
enthralling the elixer of her thrill
awoken by the seagulls
warning us
it's soon about to rain
Published 4th Nov 2021
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5th Nov 2021 00:15am
You write love and romance in a exquisite way
i usually save exquisite for the women here but you are rocking lately Tim !!!
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i usually save exquisite for the women here but you are rocking lately Tim !!!
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5th Nov 2021 6:37pm
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5th Nov 2021 2:22am
I definitely agree with PS, exquisite indeed! Wonderfully penned dear poet!
5th Nov 2021 6:38pm
5th Nov 2021 11:30am
Exquisite indeed. You really know how to capture romance and the mind with such amazing imagery and intensity Tim. This has a mythical dreamy aspect to it that is so beautiful.
5th Nov 2021 6:39pm
Thank you my dear...the places the mind and body travel to get out of the cold
5th Nov 2021 11:50am
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