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Ride the waves
When life gets tough
And beats you down
When everything's manic
but you can’t hear a sound
When your lost and alone
So unsure what to do
Stand up on your surfboard
I’ll ride the waves too
The storm will pass
The sun will shine
Some storms last longer
But I promise you’re fine
If the waves are too much
And the currents too strong
Sit down for a while
But still hold on.
A.F
And beats you down
When everything's manic
but you can’t hear a sound
When your lost and alone
So unsure what to do
Stand up on your surfboard
I’ll ride the waves too
The storm will pass
The sun will shine
Some storms last longer
But I promise you’re fine
If the waves are too much
And the currents too strong
Sit down for a while
But still hold on.
A.F
Published 2nd Nov 2021
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13th Nov 2021 1:39am
I like this one. Well written and brings on a good mood. Looking forward to reading more!
6th Jan 2022 9:45am
There's no other poet that has carried such a consistent inspirational theme throughout like you have in all your poems on DUP.
Let me just say you are the only one that I've come across with the positive vibes style.
It's like you've been brought back from the Flower Power generation in terms of an ideology of peace and love for everyone in the world.
Let me just say you are the only one that I've come across with the positive vibes style.
It's like you've been brought back from the Flower Power generation in terms of an ideology of peace and love for everyone in the world.
13th Mar 2024 7:48pm
Wonderful piece Voices, it's hope and optimism that help folks get through the tough phases and sometimes they need to hear it to acquire some inspiration.
Great work.
Great work.
