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the ethereal orchard
my nose presses into her flower
let me linger in this scenario for hours
nose deep in the blossom of her garden
she guides me through her favorite places
she gets caught by my tongue’s traces
i chaperone her through sensual elevations
her moans carry with euphoric harmony
her blossom has me charmed and excited
i aim to pleasure her as the keeper
i prop her legs up and delve in deeper
she interlocks her fingers with mine
i intensify my tongue’s artistry causing her to quake
she blooms and we enjoy the fruits of my labor
let me linger in this scenario for hours
nose deep in the blossom of her garden
she guides me through her favorite places
she gets caught by my tongue’s traces
i chaperone her through sensual elevations
her moans carry with euphoric harmony
her blossom has me charmed and excited
i aim to pleasure her as the keeper
i prop her legs up and delve in deeper
she interlocks her fingers with mine
i intensify my tongue’s artistry causing her to quake
she blooms and we enjoy the fruits of my labor
Published 25th Oct 2021
Author's Note
I wanted to write something sensual for my girlfriend.
10.24.2021
10.24.2021
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25th Oct 2021 3:00am
This indeed fits the build if she likes a tight flow dude and it is indeed sensual. Tight work dude
25th Oct 2021 1:07pm
25th Oct 2021 3:01am
I do believe she will be well pleased with such a soft poetic serenade from you my poet.. this is simply soft and it's very embracing...
25th Oct 2021 1:08pm
25th Oct 2021 3:21am
Something sensual for your gf... You succeeded!
Did you let her read it?
Or, you read it to her. (I can't read out loud. It's a glitch in my brain [I blame the Army]. I have to memorize it, if I want to recite something).
Keep on writing amigo. For her, for yourself. We're glad to read it.
Did you let her read it?
Or, you read it to her. (I can't read out loud. It's a glitch in my brain [I blame the Army]. I have to memorize it, if I want to recite something).
Keep on writing amigo. For her, for yourself. We're glad to read it.
25th Oct 2021 1:47pm
Read it to her and I replaced the words she and her with the word you and she loved it. Keep that good memory alive, I appreciate you.
25th Oct 2021 6:07am
A well pleasing write of a well pleasing act. I could visualise the scene between you two described in the lines.
'She blooms and we enjoy the fruits of my labour' - good performance.
'She blooms and we enjoy the fruits of my labour' - good performance.
25th Oct 2021 1:50pm
Reflecting on the different ways we enjoy each others company. I appreciate you.
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