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memory fails me
it was summer.
she held a bouquet
of flowers in her hand,
or was it my heart?
I can't remember
now.
...sadness.
Published 24th Oct 2021
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25th Oct 2021 4:30am
Dear BK,
This one is terribly raw and very heartfelt. Tremendous imagery set so succinctly yet it’s the raw emotion that is so captivating. H🌷
This one is terribly raw and very heartfelt. Tremendous imagery set so succinctly yet it’s the raw emotion that is so captivating. H🌷
25th Oct 2021 11:05am
30th Oct 2021 00:14am
One can almost picture the scene, colors a bit faded, like memory, but still full of emotion.
Great work.
Great work.
30th Oct 2021 2:52pm
