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The other place
Difficult is the road less traveled
dumbfounded by the fork in the road
I am ambivalence
Published 19th Oct 2021
| Edited 20th Oct 2021
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19th Oct 2021 7:21pm
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19th Oct 2021 7:39pm
I really like the varied thoughts that can be generated from this minimalistic style. I am so struck by that almost open ended last line... it sort of reverberates outwards, affecting me .... Possibly leaving more questions than answers.
Which, is totally bril, in my opinion... and my kind of catnip... lol... (honestly)
Great introduction!
I hope to read more, in the days ahead :)
🌹 - B
Which, is totally bril, in my opinion... and my kind of catnip... lol... (honestly)
Great introduction!
I hope to read more, in the days ahead :)
🌹 - B
19th Oct 2021 10:41pm
19th Oct 2021 7:39pm
19th Oct 2021 10:42pm
26th Oct 2021 10:43am
Ah, but what a sweet ambivalence it is! Nice poetic capture of feelings I've wished I could express. Thank you for sharing this!
10th Nov 2021 8:24pm
