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Past Refrection
I love her and him and all of them
inside the home and outside.
So scared, so wary, I open a palm
to breathe life into sheim,
a masterpiece of concertos, so tremendous in stature, stardom.
A relic of the past spit roast will feed the future into love so infinite that it cums again, all over the turpentine seat belt holding in the gasps. With air so sharp
and no cheese to fold, only cards will underhandedly hold.
inside the home and outside.
So scared, so wary, I open a palm
to breathe life into sheim,
a masterpiece of concertos, so tremendous in stature, stardom.
A relic of the past spit roast will feed the future into love so infinite that it cums again, all over the turpentine seat belt holding in the gasps. With air so sharp
and no cheese to fold, only cards will underhandedly hold.
Published 19th Oct 2021
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2021 7:30am
favorite line / image:
"Turpentine seatbelt holding in the gasps"
Don't quite understand it, but I tend to enjoy the surprise. The words retain a coherence, yet manage to surprise, while interacting / touching each other in strange & unexpected ways--
turpentine holding in gasps <--> folding cheese ( or NOT folding cheese, rather)...
The slant rhymes--
The sense that we're trying to get underneath the rational overlay we place on reality, but can't quite--
Tenderly--
Enjoyed!
"Turpentine seatbelt holding in the gasps"
Don't quite understand it, but I tend to enjoy the surprise. The words retain a coherence, yet manage to surprise, while interacting / touching each other in strange & unexpected ways--
turpentine holding in gasps <--> folding cheese ( or NOT folding cheese, rather)...
The slant rhymes--
The sense that we're trying to get underneath the rational overlay we place on reality, but can't quite--
Tenderly--
Enjoyed!
13th Nov 2021 3:46am
