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wanting more
i live for the daily
the mundane
the day to day
keeping me awake
from endless daydream's haze
but oh my how you amaze
bursts of coloured lights
kaleidoscoping to your form
full sun it does arise
skirting side by side
dancing shadows can't deny
the calming of naked eyes
flames flicker
forging fires that do rage
burning bodies to a branded core
a feel we both explore
under sheets of silk
tangled on the bedroom floor
neck bites and draped blood
circles crossing squares
this we do adore
penetrating deep
wanting so much more
the mundane
the day to day
keeping me awake
from endless daydream's haze
but oh my how you amaze
bursts of coloured lights
kaleidoscoping to your form
full sun it does arise
skirting side by side
dancing shadows can't deny
the calming of naked eyes
flames flicker
forging fires that do rage
burning bodies to a branded core
a feel we both explore
under sheets of silk
tangled on the bedroom floor
neck bites and draped blood
circles crossing squares
this we do adore
penetrating deep
wanting so much more
Published 16th Oct 2021
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Everyone wants more Tim
Sometimes you get it and wish you stuck with less
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16th Oct 2021 10:56pm
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
16th Oct 2021 11:27pm
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16th Oct 2021 11:51pm
17th Oct 2021 00:07am
Oh the beautiful longing you have captured here casting a most beautiful shadow among the kaleidoscope. Neck bites and draped blood is really turning me on. This one definitely penetrates deep. Really enjoyed it!
17th Oct 2021 00:12am
the more bites the better I believe... I'm happy that a little blood could turn you on :p ...thanks K for the wonderful comment x
17th Oct 2021 1:39am
“endless daydream’s haze”
yes endless dreams and wanting more, always want more. I like how the haze carried through with the fire, the burning, the sun. Beautiful descriptions.
yes endless dreams and wanting more, always want more. I like how the haze carried through with the fire, the burning, the sun. Beautiful descriptions.
17th Oct 2021 1:46am
