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holding
midnight hits us all different
when the moon tries to call us home
souls wander in search of freedom
tugging all the life away
the turns toss within the silence
shadows crowd down upon the day
drifting in the abandonment
the worries not willing to fade away
there's wetness on the windows
aches echoing feeling out the way
no stopping or pretending
what will go or what will stay
in darkness we hold no answers
when we're holding on to pain
when the moon tries to call us home
souls wander in search of freedom
tugging all the life away
the turns toss within the silence
shadows crowd down upon the day
drifting in the abandonment
the worries not willing to fade away
there's wetness on the windows
aches echoing feeling out the way
no stopping or pretending
what will go or what will stay
in darkness we hold no answers
when we're holding on to pain
Published 18th Oct 2021
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2021 11:55pm
Such lovely, beautiful fluidity...
Sometimes, there are answers that only the depths of darkness and deep pain can teach us. The hard part is trying to claw your way back towards the light, to make definitive heads or tails... (yeah, it's usually easier said than than done!, I know.. lol)
Really wonderful read, Tim :)
Thanks for sharing with us...
🌹-💙
—B
Sometimes, there are answers that only the depths of darkness and deep pain can teach us. The hard part is trying to claw your way back towards the light, to make definitive heads or tails... (yeah, it's usually easier said than than done!, I know.. lol)
Really wonderful read, Tim :)
Thanks for sharing with us...
🌹-💙
—B
19th Oct 2021 5:30pm
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19th Oct 2021 5:30pm
19th Oct 2021 2:31pm
This is so relatable. I am currently dealing with things in my life that are very difficult and you captured so much in relation to struggles and how they affect us. That darkness and cold which consumes and the depression or even apathy. Wanting a way out but sometimes there is not one, at least not one that we want. Some pain is very hard to let go of and it keeps us in the darkness. The light can be so elusive sometimes like a black hole; taking
all of the light in and making it dark. There is a great flow and meaning in this one.
all of the light in and making it dark. There is a great flow and meaning in this one.
19th Oct 2021 5:32pm
It's hard to watch certain things happen when we have no control..wishing brighter days ahead for us ..thank you my dear K x
24th Oct 2021 3:41pm
24th Oct 2021 4:08pm
