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Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
The cool night
windswept aware,
twinkles peeking
pale azure pinpoints
highlighting her
features aglow
shimmering
otherworldly grace
dewey skin
slightly a glisten
cheekbones
pierce the darkness
eyes framed
of coveted precision
drawing all attention
o' gods of exquisite design
(sighs, a marveled fleeting prayer)
blue fathoms
caressing
endless— they must surely be
stealers of willing souls
stormy questioning seas
(always, her questions)
slowly,
as if eons past,
she ever so gently
returns his gaze
locking onto
and into
feeling his hand
slipping into her own
strength
entwines
a fortunate
promise
as
answers
now, brightly shine
her certainty.
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Musings on love, respect, the universe, fate (or fortune) and if there are such things as soulmates...
—✨ 🍃 🪐💞
Musings on love, respect, the universe, fate (or fortune) and if there are such things as soulmates...
—✨ 🍃 🪐💞
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Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 3:46am
You honor me with such kind and thoughtful comments, Ted. Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and leaving your feedback.
You get glimpses of that mind with every poem I write... *wink.
All my gratitude,
🌹 - 💙
B
You get glimpses of that mind with every poem I write... *wink.
All my gratitude,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 00:00am
The beauty of the stars and yourself is shining. Keep on writing you beautiful strong smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 3:47am
I appreciate you taking the time to leave comments, Francisco! Much appreciated -
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Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 00:02am
A beautiful segue to a holding hands, leaving the imagination open for the rest of their encounter. Definitely a soulmate moment.
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Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
Hey there, NG :)
Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words. I'm so delighted you could feel the potential possibility of soulmates as the imagination spirals to ponder.... ✨ What a truly awesome notion!
It's always a pleasure to see you..
and I really appreciate the visit!
Take care, lovely lady!
🌹 - 💙
B
Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words. I'm so delighted you could feel the potential possibility of soulmates as the imagination spirals to ponder.... ✨ What a truly awesome notion!
It's always a pleasure to see you..
and I really appreciate the visit!
Take care, lovely lady!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 1:57am
Yes, Princess, "The best is yet to be" (Browning). Oh, I can only imagine, may I? Thanks for the, as usual, great poem. Hugs and kisses, O{
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Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 4:00am
Ohh Oral...(you may!)
Your comments make me smile and remind me of all the wonderful experiences that still await....
Thank you for stopping by, it's beyond pleasurable to see you 🦋
Much love, dear bard
🌹B
Your comments make me smile and remind me of all the wonderful experiences that still await....
Thank you for stopping by, it's beyond pleasurable to see you 🦋
Much love, dear bard
🌹B
Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 2:39am
I love this this write, yes soulmates are real, they must be if not what's the point of the struggle and pain in funding true love
Absolutely beautiful write gorgeous absolutely beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Absolutely beautiful write gorgeous absolutely beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 4:33am
Awww, Ron.. You ol softie you!! (I lovingly tease!)
I happen to wholeheartedly agree...Sometimes I think we can become a bit too jaded (myself included) and forget about the real romance and possibility of a connection that deep and profound as claims of being soulmates implicate. I feel good finding that perhaps corny side of myself once in a while! I am all smiles, that you enjoyed reading...
You made my night - ✨
Much love from across the pond 🌊
🌹 - B.
x
I happen to wholeheartedly agree...Sometimes I think we can become a bit too jaded (myself included) and forget about the real romance and possibility of a connection that deep and profound as claims of being soulmates implicate. I feel good finding that perhaps corny side of myself once in a while! I am all smiles, that you enjoyed reading...
You made my night - ✨
Much love from across the pond 🌊
🌹 - B.
x
Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
16th Oct 2021 10:53am
This is ever so beautiful, B.
Each word just falls from your pen, organic and pure.
I think each of us has our systems and methodologies,
by which we measure that nature of things...
These may be inherent or develop over time,
or a combination of these things.
For me, time has made these methodologies
perhaps more precise? I am not totally shore,
I would have to think about it perhaps.
But I think it is beautiful when a person
sort of makes it through the process of analysis, so to speak.
And proves to be solid, as it were...
And the magic that is in such a place,
to see and be seen...
Such an embrace that may come about,
raising such profound existential questions and insights...
Vibrating with harmony...
Oh... this is a powerful piece... Very powerful imagery and symbolism.
Nicely done.
Each word just falls from your pen, organic and pure.
I think each of us has our systems and methodologies,
by which we measure that nature of things...
These may be inherent or develop over time,
or a combination of these things.
For me, time has made these methodologies
perhaps more precise? I am not totally shore,
I would have to think about it perhaps.
But I think it is beautiful when a person
sort of makes it through the process of analysis, so to speak.
And proves to be solid, as it were...
And the magic that is in such a place,
to see and be seen...
Such an embrace that may come about,
raising such profound existential questions and insights...
Vibrating with harmony...
Oh... this is a powerful piece... Very powerful imagery and symbolism.
Nicely done.
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Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
17th Oct 2021 5:55am
My my!!
You definitely know how to leave some truly amazing, in depth and poignantly moving comments, Cipher!!
The lovely sense of symbiotic communication makes me smile and reminds me that everyone has their own process to go through to reconcile... to find validation or become who it is they're supposed to be... etc
I just dream my dreams of how I hope to feel one day in reality as opposed to through my pen's fantasy... lol.
I adore you and your kickass, comments, feedback.... eternal, ethereal existentialisms!!
love and cuddles, dearest
🌹 - B
x
You definitely know how to leave some truly amazing, in depth and poignantly moving comments, Cipher!!
The lovely sense of symbiotic communication makes me smile and reminds me that everyone has their own process to go through to reconcile... to find validation or become who it is they're supposed to be... etc
I just dream my dreams of how I hope to feel one day in reality as opposed to through my pen's fantasy... lol.
I adore you and your kickass, comments, feedback.... eternal, ethereal existentialisms!!
love and cuddles, dearest
🌹 - B
x
Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
19th Oct 2021 6:49pm
Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
19th Oct 2021 6:54pm
Well hello there, F :)
You honor me with such a kind and sincere comment. Thanks so for that.
Welcome to DUP!
I hope you enjoy your time here
🌹 B
You honor me with such a kind and sincere comment. Thanks so for that.
Welcome to DUP!
I hope you enjoy your time here
🌹 B
Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
25th Oct 2021 6:04pm
Blue, I really enjoy these offerings of colorful and brilliant depictions, almost in a surreal sense, somewhere between dream and reality. It's very inspiring.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
25th Oct 2021 6:50pm
Thanks for feeling the dreamy musings, Walter. I deeply appreciate you and those kind insights.
It's always such a welcomed sight to see you on my page 🦋
Best wishes ✨
🌹 - B
It's always such a welcomed sight to see you on my page 🦋
Best wishes ✨
🌹 - B
Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
23rd Nov 2021 10:06am
A lovely exquisite stellar poem with fab imagery and romantic endings . Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment on my newest poem too.
Plz do read and comment on my newest poem too.
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Re: Re. Queries on fortune, favours and boldness
23rd Nov 2021 10:52am