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Lust (a senryś)
Heady neediness
as his taste slips past her lips
and swirls on her tongue
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 8th Oct 2021
Author's Note
For abraxas93's Pathos and Prose competition.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12064/
©Blu2021
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Re. Lust (a senryś)
8th Oct 2021 6:09am
Visualisable scenario even without the accompanying picture. A moment of oral pleasure.
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I thank you for seeing the pleasure within the words, Solomon
Much appreciation,
🌹-B
Much appreciation,
🌹-B
Re. Lust (a senryś)
8th Oct 2021 8:32am
OMG that's saucy in the best possible way
Love and light beautiful
Ron xx
Love and light beautiful
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
8th Oct 2021 9:37am
Thanks, Ron
Truly delectable..... 😋
Yum.
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your delight!
🌹 - 💙
B
Truly delectable..... 😋
Yum.
Thanks for stopping by and sharing your delight!
🌹 - 💙
B
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
Lol.... You definitely got that right, slip
haha... Thanks for taking the time to leave me this giggle. I appreciate it, my friend. ☺
🌹 - B
haha... Thanks for taking the time to leave me this giggle. I appreciate it, my friend. ☺
🌹 - B
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Jul 2022 10:45pm
8th Oct 2021 10:15am
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Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
8th Oct 2021 10:18am
Sometimes, pleasurable things occur when you least expect it... Just sayin'....
Lol.
Thanks for reading, B
Appreciate the smile
🌹 -
Lol.
Thanks for reading, B
Appreciate the smile
🌹 -
Re. Lust (a senryś)
8th Oct 2021 10:51am
Oh my❣ Oh my❣ Oh my❣ Dearest, Lady Blue, this is delicious...head-ta-toe tingles.💋🐻💕🐰
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Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
Mmmm.... So very glad you found it yummy, BB.
Thanks for stopping by for a little taste! *wink
💙
🌹-B
xx
Thanks for stopping by for a little taste! *wink
💙
🌹-B
xx
Re. Lust (a senryś)
8th Oct 2021 4:35pm
Bluevelvete,
Your ebb and flow is a joy to behold!
Alright. Alright. Alright! LoL
down2dirt
Your ebb and flow is a joy to behold!
Alright. Alright. Alright! LoL
down2dirt
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Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
Hey there, down2dirt ;)
Ohhh yeah!! Nothing like getting the 'McConaughey' seal of approval.... Alright, indeed.. *wink
.....
Thanks for stopping by with your thoughts; I'm so happy you enjoyed the flow.. heh heh...
🌹 - B
x
Ohhh yeah!! Nothing like getting the 'McConaughey' seal of approval.... Alright, indeed.. *wink
.....
Thanks for stopping by with your thoughts; I'm so happy you enjoyed the flow.. heh heh...
🌹 - B
x
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Re. Lust (a senryś)
Let him give you oral pleasure. Enjoy the ride of orgadmic bliss. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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And what a ride it is..... *wink
Thank you so much for stopping by and for the lovely support, Francisco
🌹-B
Thank you so much for stopping by and for the lovely support, Francisco
🌹-B
Re. Lust (a senryś)
Anonymous
8th Oct 2021 7:54pm
Mmmm.
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th Oct 2021 11:45pm
8th Oct 2021 7:54pm
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Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
8th Oct 2021 11:43pm
I thoroughly enjoy the sumptuous feel within your lovely comments,DW.
Thanks for the visit and the French hugs ;)
Much love and warmth,
🌹 - B
x
Thanks for the visit and the French hugs ;)
Much love and warmth,
🌹 - B
x
Re. Lust (a senryś)
9th Oct 2021 11:20am
Dear R,
Where words of yesterday are no longer reflected, today., is how loss deeply permeates..
I can only assume that the density, when hearts are made of stone, will make for heavier words, period. Leaving hardships and continual ache.... scattered. Creating and feeding into an atmosphere that produces fear and is afraid to be free and open.... Perpetuating purposeful barriers, are now what will become the usual normal
It's feeling like the beginning of the end....for me.
Where words of yesterday are no longer reflected, today., is how loss deeply permeates..
I can only assume that the density, when hearts are made of stone, will make for heavier words, period. Leaving hardships and continual ache.... scattered. Creating and feeding into an atmosphere that produces fear and is afraid to be free and open.... Perpetuating purposeful barriers, are now what will become the usual normal
It's feeling like the beginning of the end....for me.
Re. Lust (a senryś)
10th Oct 2021 3:24am
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
10th Oct 2021 3:27am
... and continues to drip slowly down her chin....
*wink.
heh heh heh...
😋
Nice to see you, Leo!
🌹 - B
*wink.
heh heh heh...
😋
Nice to see you, Leo!
🌹 - B
Re. Lust (a senryś)
10th Oct 2021 9:50am
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
Mmmm.... it's that cherishing in the moment.... Savoring exactly right, Cipher!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generous list add.
I adore seeing you, always. ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the generous list add.
I adore seeing you, always. ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - B
Re. Lust (a senryś)
12th Oct 2021 11:06am
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
12th Oct 2021 11:14am
There she is!!!
You were definitely missed, lovely lady!
There's no one quite like you (Thank God!)
It's beyond refreshing to see you return 🦋
Thanks for the read I'm delighted that you found it so scrumptious.... *wink
🌹 - 💙
B
You were definitely missed, lovely lady!
There's no one quite like you (Thank God!)
It's beyond refreshing to see you return 🦋
Thanks for the read I'm delighted that you found it so scrumptious.... *wink
🌹 - 💙
B
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Re. Lust (a senryś)
21st Oct 2021 10:09pm
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
21st Oct 2021 10:57pm
😈 heh heh...I just can't help myself...
Glad you enjoyed *gasps*... lol
B
xo
Glad you enjoyed *gasps*... lol
B
xo
Re. Lust (a senryś)
27th Oct 2021 9:10am
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
27th Oct 2021 9:26am
I absolutely agree!
Ty so much for seeing that as well.
I appreciate it, you - so much!
🌹 - B
Ty so much for seeing that as well.
I appreciate it, you - so much!
🌹 - B
Re: Re. Lust (a senryś)
28th Oct 2021 4:45am
Re. Lust (a senryś)
29th Oct 2021 1:52pm
I miss your work, presence and the ability you had to bring the world to a bit of a standstill, while I read your words. To be left... the quiet... well, it permeates. I wonder how much time I have left to read what is left, before that too, disappears..... Why did fate, destiny, fortune or whatever force out there (perhaps just bad decision making) push THIS ending as a final narrative?.... Seems I am a glutton for punishment or o have an innate built in predisposition to betrayal, pain and loss.... Regardless, I still miss you.
The truth is the truth.
I loved your words here.
(thanks for that small kindness)
The truth is the truth.
I loved your words here.
(thanks for that small kindness)