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… guide in the mirror
which pride is your guide,
or that feeling you belong,
does your pride reside
in humanity’s zone,
are you sharing,
caring, nice and kind,
or eaten bare
like a melon rined
is love and peace
a spiritual tone,
or spite everyone
and be left alone,
which do hang
your proud hat on..
a guild that
is not really you,
dis-information is
contagious as the flu,
if you actually sat,
read a book or two,
biology, government,
world history for clues,
thur fine arts, poetry
and love points and view’s
it may become clearer,
that the guild in the mirror..
is one that was deeply confused.
or that feeling you belong,
does your pride reside
in humanity’s zone,
are you sharing,
caring, nice and kind,
or eaten bare
like a melon rined
is love and peace
a spiritual tone,
or spite everyone
and be left alone,
which do hang
your proud hat on..
a guild that
is not really you,
dis-information is
contagious as the flu,
if you actually sat,
read a book or two,
biology, government,
world history for clues,
thur fine arts, poetry
and love points and view’s
it may become clearer,
that the guild in the mirror..
is one that was deeply confused.
Published 5th Oct 2021
| Edited 6th Oct 2021
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6th Oct 2021 1:05pm
Beautiful.
I think that the cultivation of one's self is of paramount importance,
and I believe that all beings are capable of pursuing this.
I think it can be challenging at times to recognize this,
that everyone is capable of such things.
It would seem we tend to just give up on people, who may be in the dark,
in this sense.
For me, I certainly desire to help others, if I am able,
and as they say: those who are the most difficult to love need it the most?
but then... from another perspective,
one of these individuals or every single one of them may sink your battle ship.
What to do?
I genuinely believe, as a rule:
No good deed goes unpunished.
and yet I still do things if I am moved to do so.
it is certainly very complicated and I typically keep these sorts of thoughts to myself.
Nevertheless... A thought provoking and cool piece.
Nicely done.
I think that the cultivation of one's self is of paramount importance,
and I believe that all beings are capable of pursuing this.
I think it can be challenging at times to recognize this,
that everyone is capable of such things.
It would seem we tend to just give up on people, who may be in the dark,
in this sense.
For me, I certainly desire to help others, if I am able,
and as they say: those who are the most difficult to love need it the most?
but then... from another perspective,
one of these individuals or every single one of them may sink your battle ship.
What to do?
I genuinely believe, as a rule:
No good deed goes unpunished.
and yet I still do things if I am moved to do so.
it is certainly very complicated and I typically keep these sorts of thoughts to myself.
Nevertheless... A thought provoking and cool piece.
Nicely done.
6th Oct 2021 1:41pm
word!
thank you (Cipher_O) for that well received and totally on point commentary
truly brothers in thought!
the truth is a hard reality for some..
it is quite frustrating for us who get it so easily to watch others struggle so much.
your wisdom and continuing support is always greatly appreciated!
OG RESPECT
thank you (Cipher_O) for that well received and totally on point commentary
truly brothers in thought!
the truth is a hard reality for some..
it is quite frustrating for us who get it so easily to watch others struggle so much.
your wisdom and continuing support is always greatly appreciated!
OG RESPECT
6th Oct 2021 3:02pm
6th Oct 2021 3:42pm
thank you (Zenith) for taking the time to read the piece and most importantly posting your feedback.
your comment and support are truly inspiring and appreciated.
OG RESPECT
your comment and support are truly inspiring and appreciated.
OG RESPECT
