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Too Long
I have no patience
for long stories
and conversations
or long-winded answers
from long-minded folks
though I haven’t been
invited to anyone’s
holiday dinner,
sat in a center seat
of one long table.
I never thought we would
get along.
for long stories
and conversations
or long-winded answers
from long-minded folks
though I haven’t been
invited to anyone’s
holiday dinner,
sat in a center seat
of one long table.
I never thought we would
get along.
Published 5th Oct 2021
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6th Oct 2021 4:41am
Hey there Ursa :)
You really power packed getting a point across and that feel of super frustration, I think a lot of people can relate to.... Great job at evoking so much, with such little verbiage.... Wonderful!
🌹 - B
You really power packed getting a point across and that feel of super frustration, I think a lot of people can relate to.... Great job at evoking so much, with such little verbiage.... Wonderful!
🌹 - B
10th Oct 2021 2:58am
Dear B,
I just love silly poems sometimes, and this is my light side here while attempting to stay true to how sometimes we get so frustrated with others! hehe!
ahh, so glad you enjoyed it, sincerely. I appreciate you stopping by and taking the time to comment.
warmly,
ursa 💜
I just love silly poems sometimes, and this is my light side here while attempting to stay true to how sometimes we get so frustrated with others! hehe!
ahh, so glad you enjoyed it, sincerely. I appreciate you stopping by and taking the time to comment.
warmly,
ursa 💜
6th Oct 2021 3:46pm
10th Oct 2021 2:59am
6th Oct 2021 6:07pm
Dear U,
This poem is so great to me because while I don’t mind long conversations, stories or answers when they’re real and honest, I hate them when they’re forced and I have no where to escape. I can’t think of anything worse than sitting center at a holiday table under those circumstances. Rather resembles a chopping block as I stare up to the executioner begging for his swing to be swift! What I liked about your closing line is that it could read two ways. 1. The author knew the relationship was doomed from the start. 2. The author is incredulous that the relationship is working despite the differences and can’t believe it. Terrific write. H🌷
This poem is so great to me because while I don’t mind long conversations, stories or answers when they’re real and honest, I hate them when they’re forced and I have no where to escape. I can’t think of anything worse than sitting center at a holiday table under those circumstances. Rather resembles a chopping block as I stare up to the executioner begging for his swing to be swift! What I liked about your closing line is that it could read two ways. 1. The author knew the relationship was doomed from the start. 2. The author is incredulous that the relationship is working despite the differences and can’t believe it. Terrific write. H🌷
10th Oct 2021 2:54am
Dear H,
Thank you for this comment. I love this comment. This is exactly where I was when I wrote it. All of this. It makes me giggle that you are bang on here.
thank you so much!
so appreciated,
ursa 💜
Thank you for this comment. I love this comment. This is exactly where I was when I wrote it. All of this. It makes me giggle that you are bang on here.
thank you so much!
so appreciated,
ursa 💜
