Life

The density of this poem is deeply felt Ursa. You really manage to accomplish such an intense emotional response with your few well chosen words, an awesome minimalistic feat!

I enjoy thinking of the varied possibilities here, and how we're able to flex our own muscles 💪🏻 to try and make dreams come true...

Such a wonderful read - 💙
🌹 - B

Thank you B, for your kind words, your ability to dive into this piece. I especially appreciate you sharing your understanding that there are different possibilities here.
thank you for stopping by, I appreciate you!
warmly,
ursa 💜

And it can be very heavy.  Regards, Robert.

thank you for commenting Robert, for stopping by; I hear you.
warmly, ursa 💜

Dear U,

Is this why I feel fat and bloated? I’m lugging my own billion tons of dead weight! What an incredible way to view this. Everything needed to be said has been said quite perfectly in this poem. Brava. H🌷

Dear H, Oh does it ever feel like walking through mud sometimes. Thank you for your comment, for your read. I appreciate you!
warmly,
ursa 💜

i adore the stripped back approach of this poem considering the subject it discusses, i feel showing that realism is a beautiful strength in itself ursa, especially in a handful of words  

thank you for sharing this little snippet :]

-ethan

Ethan, thank you for stopping by, and for your comment. much appreciated, ursa 💜