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wonderings of a sunset's intent
I adore
these longer nights
walking
close to dusk
where hues have
noticeably changed
pigments of fall maybe
watching the day
give way
as I weave west
directly into
the sun's last throes
thoughts heavy and full
dissolve
along with the day
exquisite colors
brandish to bedazzle
blistering perfection
they turn me into
nature herself
I melt
slowly withering
into apricot skies
scorched amber embers
flare to combust
consuming all
everything
burnt orange
ripens
relinquishing
to pinkish plum
highlighting
bluebell
where night
teeters—
beckoning
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 3rd Oct 2021
Author's Note
©Blu2021
Walking before dinner
my pic
Walking before dinner
my pic
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Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
3rd Oct 2021 11:49pm
Awesome delivery BV.
A poet's sense(s) never miss even a minute change. Job.
A poet's sense(s) never miss even a minute change. Job.
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 00:27am
Hey, cf :)
... I totally agree.. I think we poets definitely keep our eyes and hearts more open than most ....as our sensitivities run deep, imo.
Thank you,
astutely said 👍🏻
and much appreciated
🌹 - B
... I totally agree.. I think we poets definitely keep our eyes and hearts more open than most ....as our sensitivities run deep, imo.
Thank you,
astutely said 👍🏻
and much appreciated
🌹 - B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
3rd Oct 2021 11:58pm
I’m taking you up on your invite 😁
You have captured a gorgeous sky; certainly inspirational! Beautiful write to describe the feelings it brings!
🍁🍁🍁
NG 🌹
You have captured a gorgeous sky; certainly inspirational! Beautiful write to describe the feelings it brings!
🍁🍁🍁
NG 🌹
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 00:36am
I am so happy you've accepted!! 👍🏻 *wink.. lol
Glad you found some inspiration and beauty, NG.
I bask sweetly in that knowledge...✨
The colors were spectacular and much more intense than usual, I think we got a blast of lower humidity ( kind of unusual this early for Florida) .... I Googled it and confirmed that it definitely affects the coloring....Cool! 😎 I learn something new everyday!!... hahaha...
I deeply appreciate you reading and the awesome comments.....
Take care, dear poetess 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
🌇
Glad you found some inspiration and beauty, NG.
I bask sweetly in that knowledge...✨
The colors were spectacular and much more intense than usual, I think we got a blast of lower humidity ( kind of unusual this early for Florida) .... I Googled it and confirmed that it definitely affects the coloring....Cool! 😎 I learn something new everyday!!... hahaha...
I deeply appreciate you reading and the awesome comments.....
Take care, dear poetess 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
🌇
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 00:01am
Beautiful picture painted by a beautiful poetess
Go girl love it
Such vivid images in my minds eye
Love and light
Ron x
Go girl love it
Such vivid images in my minds eye
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 4:15am
Hey, Ron :)
You sooo flatter me!!... lol.... I am all smiles - 💙
Thank you so much for that kindness....It makes me feel like I am on a good course ahead. That feeling is freeing and very much appreciated
I extend my gratitude for the thoughtfulness you show, the generosity you wield and the support you do graciously give me.
Much love and tons of respect,
🌹 - B
xo
You sooo flatter me!!... lol.... I am all smiles - 💙
Thank you so much for that kindness....It makes me feel like I am on a good course ahead. That feeling is freeing and very much appreciated
I extend my gratitude for the thoughtfulness you show, the generosity you wield and the support you do graciously give me.
Much love and tons of respect,
🌹 - B
xo
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 00:02am
Making sweet sweet love, while watching the sunset is hot. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 4:17am
Anytime, can be hot really!
The sunset I usually enjoy watching.... lol.
I definitely appreciate the read and your faithfulness in visiting.
Stay cool - 🌹
The sunset I usually enjoy watching.... lol.
I definitely appreciate the read and your faithfulness in visiting.
Stay cool - 🌹
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 00:31am
Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
Ohhh yes, its soothing and mood enhancing, in my opinion.... I am so delighted you felt the peaceful intent, Marks.... That's truly wonderful!!.. I'm greatly appreciate you leaving me your thoughts and insights.
You definitely make my smiles pop with your visits! ... Much appreciated - 💙
🌹 - B
You definitely make my smiles pop with your visits! ... Much appreciated - 💙
🌹 - B
Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 2:53pm
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 00:41am
This is a lovely, passionate piece. I adored every word, you've gifted your readers with beautiful imagery. I felt it all (and I love these evening fall walks too!) nicely done!
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 4:27am
Ohhh Ursa— Much thanks-🙏🏻.. for such wonderfully kind comments. I am so happy that you found exactly what it was that I hoped I was able to cconvey.... That it came through! .. That's so cool and rewarding. Your visits mean a lot to me and I am truly grateful to you for making the time.
Always a pleasure and highlight seeing you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Always a pleasure and highlight seeing you 🦋
🌹 - 💙
xo
B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 00:49am
Sunset skies, the crowning beauty of the day. Thanks for sharing yours with me. 🌼
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 4:30am
It really was a stunner, AJ... A dazzling jewel and total highlight of a sunset. My heart and soul both overflow with delight, knowing that you (and others) could be there, in a sense, to partake...
I love having you stop by - it's so meaningful - 🙏🏻
Best,
🌹 - B
I love having you stop by - it's so meaningful - 🙏🏻
Best,
🌹 - B
Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 4:50am
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4th Oct 2021 2:05am
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4th Oct 2021 4:31am
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 3:01am
Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 4:42am
Thank you, Harry - 🙏🏻
I am delighted that you could see and feel the artistic beauty that I tried to evoke.... That's such a pleasurable notion to ponder...
Much love and many sunset wishes your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
I am delighted that you could see and feel the artistic beauty that I tried to evoke.... That's such a pleasurable notion to ponder...
Much love and many sunset wishes your way ✨
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 3:58am
Beautifully descriptive spill Blue.🌹 I love Sunsets more so when the color changes before fading away in the horizon.
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 4:46am
You absolutely nailed it , Summer... That slow morphing of daylight bending it's will to the encroaching colors of nighttime... Yeah, a total favorite of mine as well - 🌇
I am so grateful for your visit and the lovely kind sentiments....
Thank you,
🌹 - B
I am so grateful for your visit and the lovely kind sentiments....
Thank you,
🌹 - B
Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 7:20am
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 7:27am
I love sunsets.... A riot of vibrant hues... Splashed across the sky by a crazy painter.... It looks nothing less than a carnival of colours celebrating the farewell of day with such fanfare....
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful spill... 👌 you are truly a wordsmith, dear poetess... I LOVE the choice of words in this beauty of a write... You are truly n artist . .. A, painter of words...
I'm drenched in your colours.... 🌷❤🌷
Thanks for sharing such a wonderful spill... 👌 you are truly a wordsmith, dear poetess... I LOVE the choice of words in this beauty of a write... You are truly n artist . .. A, painter of words...
I'm drenched in your colours.... 🌷❤🌷
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 12:55pm
Awww, your comments are the perfect way to start my day, InDreamz! Such beautiful images you graciously leave for me to bask upon.... Thank you!
I am so very happy that you found my words impactful and colorful....however, it was mostly the actual sunset itself, which inspired and practically wrote itself... lol... haha...
I am humbled and deeply appreciative of such amazingly kind praise, dear lady.
Thanks again for your visit, the list add and decorating my morning the the warmth of your presence - 🙏🏻
Much love and many sunset wishes sent your way..
🌹 - B
I am so very happy that you found my words impactful and colorful....however, it was mostly the actual sunset itself, which inspired and practically wrote itself... lol... haha...
I am humbled and deeply appreciative of such amazingly kind praise, dear lady.
Thanks again for your visit, the list add and decorating my morning the the warmth of your presence - 🙏🏻
Much love and many sunset wishes sent your way..
🌹 - B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 7:30am
This is poetry....
This can only come from the imagination of true poetess
This I dig ...
Great ink
This can only come from the imagination of true poetess
This I dig ...
Great ink
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
Hey there POft - ;)
I dig these lovely comments, so we're definitely of like mindedness.... *wink
Seriously, I humbly thank you for your beautifully kind words and I am so delighted that you found pleasure within my writing.
That means a lot , dear poet!
I adore seeing you 🦋
🌹 - B
I dig these lovely comments, so we're definitely of like mindedness.... *wink
Seriously, I humbly thank you for your beautifully kind words and I am so delighted that you found pleasure within my writing.
That means a lot , dear poet!
I adore seeing you 🦋
🌹 - B
Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 9:44pm
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 9:09am
"brandish to bedazzle
blistering perfection
they turn me into
nature herself"
Really like those lines. Awsome ink, friend 😁
blistering perfection
they turn me into
nature herself"
Really like those lines. Awsome ink, friend 😁
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
Hey, DC :)
I just love when something takes over the pen and it almost feels like *poof* and the lines just appear
(it's no often!) .... Then, after a quick proofread— I think "I wrote that?" "Wow!!" ... lmao... I don't say that with an iota of ego (because I'm usually as surprised as anyone) only the shock that I myself sometimes feel, when I can't recall exactly my thought process of plucking lines or phrases from the ether of imagination..... Ha!... So, I very much appreciate your thoughtful remarks.
I am so grateful for you visits and I'm truly tickled that you enjoyed my little poem to the point of highlighting certain lines...
Thank you for that, for the list add and being a cool DU friend...... 😎
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
I just love when something takes over the pen and it almost feels like *poof* and the lines just appear
(it's no often!) .... Then, after a quick proofread— I think "I wrote that?" "Wow!!" ... lmao... I don't say that with an iota of ego (because I'm usually as surprised as anyone) only the shock that I myself sometimes feel, when I can't recall exactly my thought process of plucking lines or phrases from the ether of imagination..... Ha!... So, I very much appreciate your thoughtful remarks.
I am so grateful for you visits and I'm truly tickled that you enjoyed my little poem to the point of highlighting certain lines...
Thank you for that, for the list add and being a cool DU friend...... 😎
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 10:08am
Amber embers...
Righteous.
Read like an interactive painting.
Deeply engaged the senses B.
Your skies are marvels of marvelous.
Righteous.
Read like an interactive painting.
Deeply engaged the senses B.
Your skies are marvels of marvelous.
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 1:20pm
You make me feel like an artist 🎨, Cipher!!! Awww.... that's truly awesome and insanely cool 😎
I loved that you marveled (one of my favorite words, btw) and I humbly thank you, dear poet
-Just nature, painting her own canvas so freaking beautifully that it could ONLY inspire like it did-...
I adore you, and all the kindness you extend me.
Much love, and plentiful amber embers sent your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💋
B
I loved that you marveled (one of my favorite words, btw) and I humbly thank you, dear poet
-Just nature, painting her own canvas so freaking beautifully that it could ONLY inspire like it did-...
I adore you, and all the kindness you extend me.
Much love, and plentiful amber embers sent your way ✨ 💫 ✨
🌹 - 💋
B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
4th Oct 2021 12:48pm
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
Thanks so much for painting me such a lovely picture with your kind remarks. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading and felt the craftwork of the words, permeate.
Best wishes,
🌹 - 💙
B
Best wishes,
🌹 - 💙
B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
5th Oct 2021 6:12am
What an awe inspiring sight that sunset must have been, love the picture, the words describe it well :)
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
5th Oct 2021 6:25am
Hey there, PR :)
Believe or not this picture barely does the sunset justice!! It was one of the best I've seen in a long time. I am so very glad you enjoyed it and felt I was able to convey my experience well; that's very kind of you and I appreciate you taking the time to stop by to leave your thoughts with me.
I really revel in the visit.
Lovely regards,
🌹 - B
Believe or not this picture barely does the sunset justice!! It was one of the best I've seen in a long time. I am so very glad you enjoyed it and felt I was able to convey my experience well; that's very kind of you and I appreciate you taking the time to stop by to leave your thoughts with me.
I really revel in the visit.
Lovely regards,
🌹 - B
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
13th Oct 2021 10:06pm
To find your name on the tip of my tongue at every turn taken..... surprises and exacerbates.
Missing you feels like a full time job ..
-x
Missing you feels like a full time job ..
-x
Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
19th Oct 2021 8:40pm
Sunset (like sunrises) tend to have to really stunning colors, and if captured right, they certainly are made to inspire.
Wonderful work Blue. Loved every line on this.
Wonderful work Blue. Loved every line on this.
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Re: Re. wonderings of a sunset's intent
Awww .. Thanks for the generous RL add and all your loveliness, Walter! These comments are truly appreciated and extremely awesome.
Glad you enjoyed the stroll around my neighborhood!
The sunset was absolutely killer that day , indeed.
🌹 - 🌇
x
Glad you enjoyed the stroll around my neighborhood!
The sunset was absolutely killer that day , indeed.
🌹 - 🌇
x