A pretty nose

As I read this I feel like you are describing a beautiful painting, it reminded me of the one Raffaelo did with the unicorn and the fair-skinned maiden.  It's a nice painting, you've done her beauty justice.
I was unsure how I felt about the nose, but I think it works for me.

LJ

Thank you. It's just I am focusing on nose because, she has a very pretty nose, and I made a comment about it the other day. I am not trying to describe everything about her.

I'm digging it definitely.  It's a sweet, smitten write.

LJ

An interesting take. The only other take on a nose I know of spun a whole book.

"My nose is Gargantuan! You little Pig-snout, you tiny Monkey-Nostrils, you virtually invisible Pekinese-Puss, don't you realize that a nose like mine is both scepter and orb, a monument to me superiority? A great nose is the banner of a great man, a generous heart, a towering spirit, an expansive soul--such as I unmistakably am, and such as you dare not to dream of being, with your bilious weasel's eyes and no nose to keep them apart! With your face as lacking in all distinction--as lacking, I say, in interest, as lacking in pride, in imagination, in honesty, in lyricism--in a word, as lacking in nose as that other offensively bland expanse at the opposite end of your cringing spine--which I now remove from my sight by stringent application of my boot!”
― Edmond Rostand, Cyrano de Bergerac

I think it's really lovely, cute, and your own unique style which is very important. I think she will adore it. I would. ;) I have sent a few possible suggestions in case they are helpful. :)

Yes, they were really helpful. Thank you so much.

I find this darling ... well done dear poet ...

Thank you. <3

Hi Pen!

This is so sweet!!
Your obviously smitten with her and using her nose as a topic for a serenade.
You should so grab an acoustic guitar and just go for it!!
I promise she is going to love it.
It is completely original and unique just like her.

Thank You! I am waiting for her response.

Dear P,

Echo all the above comments. This is a really clever and unique gift. I wish you both the very best.
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Thank you so much.

Gorgeous homage to your special woman. I loved how you focused on the nose with your unique envisioning. There is so much I love about this poem. It touches my heart and makes me feel this woman's beauty as you see her. Below is a sample rewrite of your second verse. You are free to use it as you like. Thanks for inviting me to read this.

My ode to you begins at your nose
Whose symmetry I behold
In its perfection of grace
to decorate your face
With your singular diadem
A facet of love's purity

Thank you, John. I love your retake of second verse. But, we are not yet on the stage of being called lovers yet, so I didn't want to express love, but adoration and personal observation. To perhaps show that I listen to her, I see her, I admire her. She has travelled a lot, so that's why I want to breathe in her experiences, tastes, etc.

You could replace the last line with:

The prettiest purity instead of love. Just a thought. Hope your friendship with her blossoms into something more my friend.

As in “a facet of the prettiest purity”

Oh. This was entirely lovely…🙏😇

An A++ poem accompanied by a gorgeous lady. She is so, so lucky to have you. Hugs and peace, O{