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friend
a tender tilt of thoughts change my perspective
when in the dawning of your smile I glow
I see you in my mind's eye happy
a gentle awkward soul
your kind of beauty astonishes me
it is easy without trying
people feel comforted by your presence
simply put it just is
when shadows cross my soul
you don't chase them away
you get acquainted with them
accepting they are a part of me
sit with me awhile in the gloaming
I'm inside my sorrow
let me catch the next sun ray with you
and shoot across the sky
finding ourselves in an obliging field
where the seeds of our friendship grow mighty
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Re. friend
3rd Oct 2021 4:41pm
Re: Re. friend
3rd Oct 2021 5:23pm
Re. friend
3rd Oct 2021 6:26pm
This is so sweet and beautiful Brenda. Love the tenderness express in this spill.❤️
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Re: Re. friend
3rd Oct 2021 6:28pm
good morning beautiful Summer thank you graciously for the love on this write...you are a lovely soul❤
Re. friend
3rd Oct 2021 7:23pm
I loved the gentle flow of this, whether real or imaged, the words are certainly well crafted. 🌼
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Re: Re. friend
4th Oct 2021 00:30am
hi there dearest Joe this is a woman perhaps even a few I've had the pleasure of knowing...it's keen eye you have in part this lady is imagined as well... thank you for such a thoughtful comment❤
Re. friend
3rd Oct 2021 9:06pm
If we are lucky enough, we all have a said friend. Lovely here, Crim. love you. <3
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Re: Re. friend
4th Oct 2021 00:31am
thank you dearest Mysterious One if you don't have another already I'll love your shadows❤
Re: Re. friend
4th Oct 2021 1:55am
Re. friend
3rd Oct 2021 11:55pm
Re: Re. friend
4th Oct 2021 1:13pm
good morning dearest Ron thank you graciously my friend I cherish your thoughts❤
Re. friend
4th Oct 2021 00:42am
Dear B,
There is nothing so wonderful. I love your view of this and how it made me think how lucky I am to have a friend like this. Beautiful write. H🌷
There is nothing so wonderful. I love your view of this and how it made me think how lucky I am to have a friend like this. Beautiful write. H🌷
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Re: Re. friend
4th Oct 2021 1:25am
hi there beautiful Honoria to me DU is much like this type of friend I'm lucky to have you all thank you❤
Re. friend
4th Oct 2021 10:36am
You always expand as you delve into the centers of your subject matter, making for quite powerful nuances that are delectable to the senses.
Beautiful dearest Crimsin.
Beautiful dearest Crimsin.
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Re: Re. friend
20th Oct 2021 4:39pm
Re. friend
19th Oct 2021 8:37pm
This was pretty, filled with energy and positivity. As it's been said before, friendships are like flowers (or plants), gotta water them so they continue to grow, for a long time.
Wonderful work.
Wonderful work.
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Re: Re. friend
20th Oct 2021 4:41pm
thank you dearest Wally for the thoughtful and wise comment I struggle to maintain friendships but I can appreciate beautiful people you being one of them💗